Party— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammar mistakes, repetition and is slightly long. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using correct verb forms and articles, and one supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, say whether you like parties, explain why with a specific preference, and conclude briefly.

Example: I generally like parties that are with friends because I can relax and have meaningful conversations. However, I don’t enjoy large gatherings with many strangers, as I find them stressful and hard to connect in. So it depends on the type of party.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammar errors and an incomplete final clause. Improve by using a clear past-tense topic sentence, specific frequency (e.g., seldom/rarely), and a brief reason. Use linking words for coherence and finish the sentence fully.

Example: When I was a child I rarely had parties because birthday parties were not a common custom in my community. Therefore I only attended a few small family gatherings rather than big celebrations.

Suggestion: The idea is clear but grammar and word choice are incorrect. Use correct modal verbs and conditional forms, avoid vague phrases like “kind of have many thinking,” and give one concrete example of what you would do. Keep answer concise and natural.

Example: I haven’t organized a party yet, but I would be willing to if I had the chance. For example, I would plan a small themed dinner for close friends, choose music everyone likes, and prepare simple games to make it fun.

× I think it will depends on the situation.

✓ I think it will depend on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement with modal/future auxiliary: 'will' is followed by the base form of the verb, so use 'depend' not 'depends'. Improve by remembering that auxiliary verbs take the base form of main verbs (will + base verb).

× For me I prefer parties which I can have some friends to chat with instead of that the former parties which I have to socialize with strangers.

✓ For me, I prefer parties where I can chat with friends rather than the kinds of parties where I have to socialize with strangers.

Incorrect relative clause and word choice: 'which I can have some friends to chat with' is unnatural; use 'where I can chat with friends'. 'Instead of that the former parties' is wrong structure; use 'rather than the kinds of parties'. Improve by using 'where' for places/events and parallel structure with 'rather than'.

× So it depends.

✓ So it depends.

This sentence is grammatically fine and fits the context; no change needed. Keep short answer 'So it depends.' for conversational responses.

× I don't think so that it's common for us children in Asia to have parties when we were child because they are not our customs.

✓ I don't think it was common for us children in Asia to have parties when we were children because they were not our customs.

Tense inconsistency and singular/plural: The speaker refers to past habits, so use past tense 'was' and 'were'. 'When we were child' should be 'when we were children' (plural). Also 'they are not our customs' should be past 'they were not our customs' to match time frame. Improve by keeping all time references in the same past tense and using plural 'children'.

× So I barely have the.

✓ So I rarely had them.

Grammatical and lexical errors: 'barely have the' is incomplete and incorrect. Use 'rarely had them' to indicate infrequent past occurrence; 'rarely' better than 'barely' for frequency and 'them' refers to parties. Maintain past tense to match previous sentence.

× I haven't organized a party, but I would willing to organize a party if I got the chi chance because I kind of have many thinking about what a wonderful party.

✓ I haven't organized a party, but I would be willing to organize one if I got the chance because I have many ideas about what would make a wonderful party.

Multiple issues: missing 'be' after 'would' (modal verb usage + structure), incorrect word 'chi' -> 'chance', wrong 'have many thinking' -> 'have many ideas', and conditional tense consistency: 'would be willing... if I got the chance' is acceptable informal second conditional but improving clarity: keep 'would be willing' and use 'would make' for hypothetical result. Improve by using correct modal structure 'would be willing', correct nouns ('ideas'), and clearer conditional phrasing.