Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且使用更准确的词汇表达。可以直接说明有很多人步行，因此需要人行横道，强调安全和便利性。

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because many people walk in the area. They make it safe and convenient for pedestrians to cross the streets.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和用词不准确，表达不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明想要推广共享汽车系统以减少交通拥堵和提高行人安全。

Example: Actually, I think we should quickly build a complete car-sharing system. This would reduce traffic congestion and make the streets safer for pedestrians.

× Yes, there are lots of crosswalks around my home because presidents in there need use to go for walking and it is convenient and safe for passersby to use.

✓ Yes, there are lots of crosswalks around my home because residents there need to walk, and it is convenient and safe for passersby to use.

句中“need use to go for walking”结构不正确，动词“need”后应接不定式“to walk”或动名词形式。这里应使用“need to walk”表示“需要走路”。另外，“presidents”应为“residents”，意思是居民。建议改为“residents there need to walk”。

× Actually I think we should quickly construction completely share car system which could reduce the traffic and keep the passers by more safe.

✓ Actually, I think we should quickly construct a complete car-sharing system which could reduce traffic and keep passersby safer.

句中“quickly construction completely share car system”结构混乱，动词“construction”应为动词“construct”，且“completely”应改为形容词“complete”修饰“car-sharing system”。“share car system”应为“car-sharing system”。“passers by”应写作“passersby”。此外，“more safe”应改为“safer”，使用比较级。建议改为“quickly construct a complete car-sharing system”并将“keep the passers by more safe”改为“keep passersby safer”。