Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确的冠词和复数形式，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live. Since my county had many car accidents, the government decided to build more crosswalks to make it safer for pedestrians.

Suggestion: 你的回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，词汇使用不当，且缺少具体细节和逻辑连接。建议先明确表达想法，使用恰当的词汇，并用连接词组织句子，使回答更连贯且具体。

Example: Yes, I would like to improve the public transportation in my area. Although there are few passengers now, having more frequent bus or train services would help people travel more conveniently in the future.

× Yes, though I live in the countryside but there was lots of car accidents happened in my county.

✓ Yes, though I live in the countryside, there were lots of car accidents happening in my county.

这里的car accidents是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式were，而不是was。lots of后面接复数名词，谓语动词也应与之保持一致。

× Yes, though I live in the countryside but there was lots of car accidents happened in my county.

✓ Yes, though I live in the countryside, there were lots of car accidents happening in my county.

句中同时使用了though和but，造成连接词重复，应去掉but，使用though引导让步状语从句。

× So governments decide to build more crosswalk in my county and to keep the pedestrians more safer.

✓ So the government decided to build more crosswalks in my county and to keep the pedestrians safer.

governments应为单数the government，crosswalk应为复数crosswalks，more safer是错误的比较级表达，应直接用safer。

× So governments decide to build more crosswalk in my county and to keep the pedestrians more safer.

✓ So the government decided to build more crosswalks in my county and to keep the pedestrians safer.

前文提到过去发生的事情，谓语动词应使用过去时decided，而不是现在时decide。

× Yes, definitely, because I think it should be more busiest or be more an artist station.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I think it should be busier or be more of an artist station.

busiest是最高级，前面有more，造成重复比较，应使用比较级busier。an artist station前应加介词of。

× Yes, definitely, because I think it should be more busiest or be more an artist station.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I think it should be busier or be more of an artist station.

be more an artist station缺少介词of，正确表达是be more of an artist station。

× In my area though there might be no people or student people to take them, but it is necessary for people to transport.

✓ In my area, though there might be no people or students to take them, it is necessary for people to have transportation.

student people表达不自然，应改为students；transport作名词时应用transportation；句中but连接不当，应去掉。