Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. To improve, try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, provide a more concise and natural response by directly answering the question and adding a relevant detail with proper linking words.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because I live in a suburb close to the International Airport, so there is a lot of traffic in the area.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. To improve, make sure to finish your sentences and clearly express your ideas. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific details about what you would like to change regarding the traffic.

Example: I would like the traffic lights to have longer green signals because currently, the crossing time is too short for pedestrians to cross safely.

× there are many cross crosswalk near where I live

✓ there are many crosswalks near where I live

The noun 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because it refers to multiple crosswalks. Using the singular form with 'many' is incorrect.

× I live in the suburb that near the International Airport

✓ I live in the suburb that is near the International Airport

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to connect the subject and the prepositional phrase. 'That near' is incorrect; it should be 'that is near'.

× there are many car umm go to there so

✓ there are many cars that go there, so

The noun 'car' should be plural 'cars' to match 'many'. Also, 'go to there' is incorrect; it should be 'go there'. The phrase 'umm' is filler and can be omitted for clarity.

× the time of traffic light can be along

✓ the time of the traffic light can be long

The adjective 'along' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'long' to describe duration. Also, 'traffic light' needs the definite article 'the'.

× every time I walk to the opposite I find the time is very. That's not enough to.

✓ Every time I walk to the opposite side, I find the time is very short. That's not enough.

The phrase 'walk to the opposite' is incomplete; it should be 'walk to the opposite side'. The sentence 'I find the time is very.' is incomplete and unclear; it needs an adjective like 'short'. The last sentence fragment 'That's not enough to.' is incomplete and should be 'That's not enough.'