Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. You should directly answer the question first, then provide clear and specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'crosswalks' instead of 'pedestrian crossroads'.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my area because it is close to a university. Many families and students visit the campus, so the local authorities have installed numerous crosswalks to ensure pedestrian safety.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains vocabulary errors. You should use the correct term 'traffic lights' instead of 'tropical light'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more traffic lights installed in busy areas because there are many cars and buses. This would help reduce traffic jams and make it safer for passengers and pedestrians.

× Yes, there are many pedestrian crossroads near where I live because it is near a university, so there are many families and parents.

✓ Yes, there are many pedestrian crosswalks near where I live because it is near a university, so there are many families and parents.

The word 'crossroads' refers to an intersection of two or more roads, which is different from 'crosswalks' that are designated pedestrian paths. Since the question is about crosswalks, the correct plural form is 'crosswalks' not 'crossroads'.

× They will visit there just to stay and visit this campus.

✓ They visit there just to stay and visit this campus.

The use of 'will' suggests future tense, but the context implies a habitual action. Therefore, the simple present tense 'visit' is appropriate to indicate regular visits.

× As a result, authorities installed.

✓ As a result, authorities have installed them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'them' clarifies what was installed, and using the present perfect 'have installed' connects the action to the present context.

× I guess some area need to install some tropical light because there are so many cars and buses.

✓ I guess some areas need to install some traffic lights because there are so many cars and buses.

'Area' should be plural 'areas' to match 'some', and 'tropical light' is incorrect; the correct term is 'traffic lights' which are plural to match the context.

× I guess tropical lights could relieve the traffic jams and ensure the passengers.

✓ I guess traffic lights could relieve the traffic jams and ensure the safety of the passengers.

The modal verb 'could' is correctly used to express possibility. However, 'tropical lights' is incorrect; it should be 'traffic lights'. Also, 'ensure the passengers' is incomplete; it should be 'ensure the safety of the passengers' for clarity.