Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "so" and clarify your meaning, for example, "make the possession easy" is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clearer explanation.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because a large mall is nearby. Since many people visit the mall, the city has installed numerous crosswalks to ensure pedestrian safety and convenience.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence more fluent. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to explain why you want the change. Also, be specific about the benefit of adding a left turn signal.

Example: Yes, I would like to have left turn signals installed in some parts of my area because currently, there are none. This change would help reduce traffic congestion and improve safety for drivers making left turns.

× Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because there is a mall nearby, so a lot of people come here to visit the mall and so there are so many crosswalks which make the possession easy.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because there is a mall nearby, so a lot of people come here to visit the mall and so there are so many crosswalks which make the pedestrian crossing easy.

The word 'possession' is incorrectly used here; the correct term is 'pedestrian crossing' or 'crossing'. 'Possession' refers to ownership, which does not fit the context. Using the correct noun improves clarity and meaning.

× Yes, in my area on some sections there are no left on signal.

✓ Yes, in my area, on some sections, there is no left turn signal.

The phrase 'left on signal' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'left turn signal' to indicate a traffic signal allowing left turns. Also, 'there are' should be 'there is' because 'signal' is singular.

× So I would like I would like that there should be the left turn signal.

✓ So I would like there to be a left turn signal.

The original sentence is redundant and awkward. The phrase 'I would like that there should be' is incorrect. The correct modal verb usage is 'I would like there to be' followed by the noun phrase. Also, the definite article 'the' before 'left turn signal' is unnecessary here.