Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and redundancy, and the word 'crossworks' is incorrect; it should be 'crosswalks'. Try to give a clear and direct answer with correct vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: No, there are not many crosswalks where I live because although it is a busy city, it is less crowded compared to here.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words to connect your points, and complete your thoughts. Avoid filler words and be specific about what you want to change and why.

Example: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic by regulating auto rickshaws. Although they are popular and convenient, their increasing number causes congestion and pollution in our area.

× No, there are not a lot of crossworks around the place where I live because, uh, though it's a city or it's a bustling city, but it's not, uh, like here, so no.

✓ No, there are not a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because, uh, though it's a city or it's a bustling city, but it's not, uh, like here, so no.

The word 'crossworks' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks'. This is a singular and plural issue. Use 'crosswalks' to refer to multiple pedestrian crossings.

× Yes uh, there is a lot of things what which I would like to change about the traffic in our area.

✓ Yes uh, there are a lot of things which I would like to change about the traffic in our area.

The phrase 'there is a lot of things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'what which' is redundant; use 'which' only. This is a singular and plural issue and sentence structure issue.

× One of the main thing is the rickshaws uh auto rickshaws, which are nowadays really popular and very convenient for people, but uh day by day it's getting really umm.

✓ One of the main things is the rickshaws, uh auto rickshaws, which are nowadays really popular and very convenient for people, but uh day by day they're getting really umm.

The phrase 'One of the main thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun, so 'things' is correct. Also, 'it's getting' should be 'they're getting' to agree with the plural subject 'rickshaws'. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement issue.