Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'crossword' instead of 'crosswalks' and 'nautical' which seems incorrect. Try to use correct vocabulary and form complete sentences. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about the crosswalks.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because my town is small and pedestrian-friendly. These crosswalks connect different streets, making it easy and safe for people to walk to various places.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid vague expressions like 'and whatever' and incomplete sentences. Try to clearly state what you want to change and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I would like to improve traffic management near the two local markets because they are often very crowded. For example, better traffic signals or pedestrian crossings could reduce congestion and make it safer for both drivers and pedestrians.

× Uh yes, there was a lot of crossword around where I'm living right now as nautical isn't very big town.

✓ Uh yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around where I live right now as Nautical isn't a very big town.

The word 'crossword' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'crosswalks'. Also, 'was' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject and present tense context. 'I'm living' is better as 'I live' for habitual action. 'Nautical' should be capitalized as a proper noun, and 'isn't very big town' needs an article 'a' before 'very big town'.

× It has many pedestrians and crosswalks that connect the route that connect umm, other routes.

✓ It has many pedestrians and crosswalks that connect the routes that connect, umm, other routes.

The singular 'the route' should be plural 'the routes' to agree with 'crosswalks' and the context. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma after 'connect' to separate the hesitation 'umm'.

× Yes, I would like to change how they manage the traffic, especially in about two markets because it is very crowded and whatever.

✓ Yes, I would like to change how they manage the traffic, especially around two markets because it is very crowded and so on.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'about two markets'; 'around' is more appropriate to indicate the area near the markets. Also, 'whatever' is informal and vague; 'so on' or 'and so forth' is better in formal speech.

× Whenever I go there, I always get frustrated because of many people and disciplines driving and.

✓ Whenever I go there, I always get frustrated because of many people and undisciplined driving.

The phrase 'disciplines driving and' is unclear and incomplete. It seems the intended meaning is 'undisciplined driving' or 'reckless driving'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion. Replacing with 'undisciplined driving' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.