Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer sentence structure. Also, add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: In my city, there aren't many crosswalks because the streets mainly prioritize motorbikes and cars, which makes pedestrian crossing difficult.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors that affect understanding. To improve, respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices.

Example: Yes, I would like to improve traffic management in my city, Hanoi, because it is very busy and congested due to the large number of vehicles, which often causes delays and pollution.

× As I see, there are not many crosswalks around my city because it often prioritize the streets for motorbike and car.

✓ As I see, there are not many crosswalks around my city because it often prioritizes the streets for motorbikes and cars.

The sentence has a subject-verb agreement error where 'it' refers to 'my city' and should be followed by 'prioritizes' (third person singular). Also, 'motorbike' and 'car' should be plural to match the context of multiple vehicles. The definite article 'the' is not necessary before 'streets' in this context.

× As I see, there are not many crosswalks around my city because it often prioritize the streets for motorbike and car.

✓ As I see, there are not many crosswalks around my city because it often prioritizes the streets for motorbikes and cars.

The verb 'prioritize' should be 'prioritizes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to the city). Also, 'motorbike' and 'car' should be plural to correctly refer to multiple vehicles.

× It seemed hard for me to train and think about the traffic in my cities because our our handle is where I live, which is the capital of Vietnam.

✓ It seemed hard for me to train and think about the traffic in my city because our area is where I live, which is the capital of Vietnam.

The phrase 'our our handle' is incorrect and likely a typo. It should be 'our area' or a similar phrase. Also, 'cities' should be singular 'city' to match the context. Pronoun usage is corrected to improve clarity.

× It's very energetic and busy city, so there are many vehicles.

✓ It's a very energetic and busy city, so there are many vehicles.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very energetic and busy city'. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.