Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz tekrarlar ve eksik dilbilgisi düzeltilmeli. İlk cümlede doğrudan soruya yanıt verin, ardından bir bağlaç kullanarak kısa bir neden veya örnek ekleyin. Ayrıca “pedestrian” sözcüğünü uygun biçimde çoğul veya niteleyici olarak kullanın. Önerilen uzunluk 1-3 cümle olmalı.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home, which makes it much safer for pedestrians. For example, the main street has several marked crossings and traffic lights that help people cross easily.

Suggestion: Cevap daha net ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı; fikir açıkça ifade edilip mantıksal bağlaçlarla desteklenmeli. Bir veya iki somut değişiklik önerin ve bunların neden faydalı olacağını kısaça açıklayın. Fiil ve kelime seçimlerinde doğruluk (ör. "implement a carpooling system", "provide tax reductions") önemlidir.

Example: Yes, I would like to reduce traffic congestion by encouraging carpooling and improving public transport. For instance, the government could implement a carpooling system and offer tax reductions to companies that support employee car-sharing, which would decrease the number of cars on the road.

× People, it's very appropriate for pedestrian and.

✓ People can walk safely; it is very suitable for pedestrians.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear verb and correct noun form. Use a full clause with a modal or verb (can walk) and plural noun 'pedestrians' to match meaning. Also replace 'appropriate for pedestrian' with 'suitable for pedestrians' for correct adjective/noun form and plural agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, absolutely I would like to change about to traffic in my area, especially in crowded cities.

✓ Yes, absolutely I would like to change the traffic situation in my area, especially in crowded cities.

Incorrect placement of 'about to' and wrong preposition. Use 'change the traffic situation' or 'change traffic' without 'about to'. Keep tense modal 'would like' + base verb; here 'would like to change the traffic situation' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:11

× The government needs offer carpooling system and offers tax reduction for people programming such a program.

✓ The government needs to offer a carpooling system and offer tax reductions to people participating in such a program.

Missing 'to' after 'needs' (needs to offer). 'Carpooling system' requires an article 'a'. Use plural 'tax reductions' and correct verb forms: keep parallel structure 'needs to offer ... and offer ...' or 'should offer ... and provide ...'. 'Programming' is incorrect here; use 'participating in' to indicate people taking part in the program. Grammar problem type ID:4