Traffic— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng và liên quan nhưng cần sửa một vài lỗi ngữ pháp, rút gọn để tự nhiên hơn và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc. Cụ thể: sửa thì và số (ví dụ "city install" → "the city has installed"), dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tối đa 3–4 câu, và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc chi tiết như khoảng cách giữa lối đi bộ và cửa hàng để cụm thông tin cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my apartment. My building sits between two main roads and a busy intersection, so the city has installed several crosswalks to protect the heavy foot traffic. For example, there is a crosswalk right outside a small shopping strip about 20 meters from my front door.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và làm câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Sửa lỗi số và thì ("policy are" → "policies are"), dùng liên từ thích hợp để nối ý (for example, moreover, consequently). Bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể về công nghệ hoặc kết quả mong muốn để câu trả lời thực tế và thuyết phục hơn.

Example: Yes. I would introduce smarter traffic management, such as adaptive traffic lights and real-time monitoring cameras. These systems could adjust signal timings based on traffic flow, reducing peak-hour congestion. Clearer policies and better coordination between agencies would also make travel safer and more reliable.

× This area has a lot of pedestrians and shops so city install several crosswalks for safety.

✓ This area has a lot of pedestrians and shops, so the city has installed several crosswalks for safety.

The original sentence has two issues: (1) Missing definite article before 'city' and (2) verb form and tense. 'City' refers to a specific entity here, so use the definite article 'the city' (Article errors, ID 22 / Incorrect use of the definite article, ID 17). The verb 'install' does not agree with the subject and the context describing a completed action; it should be past simple 'installed' with the auxiliary 'has' for present perfect 'has installed' to indicate an action affecting the present. Use 'has installed' to show that the city installed crosswalks and they remain in place. Suggestion: include 'the' before 'city' and use 'has installed' for correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate tense.

× The current policy are unclear and vague, so clear regulations and better coordination would reduce congestion and make travelling safer.

✓ The current policy is unclear and vague, so clear regulations and better coordination would reduce congestion and make traveling safer.

The subject 'policy' is singular, so the verb must be 'is' rather than 'are' (Third person singular issue, ID 2 / Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Also, 'travelling' can be spelled 'traveling' in American English; either is acceptable depending on variety. Suggestion: change 'are' to 'is' to match the singular subject 'policy'.