Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'shopping patterns', 'go to shopping', 'some snake', 'by my personal items'). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually go shopping once a week to buy new clothes, snacks for my family, and some personal items.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'I am a student in I'll leave a budget for my parents' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I am a student and I have a limited budget from my parents. Therefore, I try to buy things at the lowest price.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'Should actually not', 'go into something'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: It is not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I usually make a list of the things I need before I go shopping.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng (ví dụ: 'Ann is can be used', 'cheap cheaper ones is will'). Bạn nên luyện tập cách nói câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác để truyền đạt ý kiến hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe expensive products are usually better because they have higher quality and last longer. On the other hand, cheaper products often have lower quality and may only be used a few times.

× Yes, I have a shopping patterns so that's why I always go to shopping once a week because I want to buy new clothes and some snake for my family and also by my personal items.

✓ Yes, I have a shopping pattern so that's why I always go shopping once a week because I want to buy new clothes and some snacks for my family and also buy my personal items.

The word 'patterns' should be singular 'pattern' because it refers to one habitual behavior. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' as 'shopping' is a verb here. 'Snake' is a typo and should be 'snacks'. 'By' is a typo and should be 'buy'. These corrections fix singular/plural issues and word choice errors.

× Yes, I have a shopping patterns so that's why I always go to shopping once a week because I want to buy new clothes and some snake for my family and also by my personal items.

✓ Yes, I have a shopping pattern so that's why I always go shopping once a week because I want to buy new clothes and some snacks for my family and also buy my personal items.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. This is a common preposition error.

× Yes, I always do it when I'm going shopping because you know, I am a student in I'll leave a budget for my parents. So that's why I always want to buy a things that with lowest price.

✓ Yes, I always do it when I'm going shopping because you know, I am a student and I have a budget from my parents. So that's why I always want to buy things with the lowest price.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'I'll leave a budget for my parents' is unclear and likely meant 'I have a budget from my parents'. These fix singular/plural and sentence clarity issues.

× Yes, I always do it when I'm going shopping because you know, I am a student in I'll leave a budget for my parents. So that's why I always want to buy a things that with lowest price.

✓ Yes, I always do it when I'm going shopping because you know, I am a student and I have a budget from my parents. So that's why I always want to buy things with the lowest price.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used; it should be 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× So that's why I always want to buy a things that with lowest price.

✓ So that's why I always want to buy things with the lowest price.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'things'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× Should actually not, because before I go into something, I will make a list what things that I need to buy.

✓ Actually, I should not, because before I go into somewhere, I will make a list of the things that I need to buy.

The modal verb 'should' is misplaced; 'Actually, I should not' is clearer. Also, 'go into something' is vague; 'go into somewhere' or 'go shopping' is better. 'Make a list what things' should be 'make a list of the things' to use correct preposition and article.

× Should actually not, because before I go into something, I will make a list what things that I need to buy.

✓ Actually, I should not, because before I go somewhere, I will make a list of the things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'go into something' is incorrect; 'go somewhere' or 'go shopping' is appropriate. Also, 'make a list what things' should be 'make a list of the things' to use the correct preposition.

× Ann is can be used for long time, however cheap cheaper ones is will.

✓ And it can be used for a long time; however, cheaper ones will not.

'Ann' is a typo for 'And it'. 'Is will' is incorrect; modal verb 'will' should not be combined with 'is'. The sentence needed pronoun correction and verb form adjustment.

× Ann is can be used for long time, however cheap cheaper ones is will.

✓ And it can be used for a long time; however, cheaper ones will not.

'Cheap cheaper ones' is redundant; 'cheaper ones' is correct. 'Is will' is incorrect verb form. Also, 'long time' needs an article 'a' before it.

× You can just you can use it just one or three times.

✓ You can just use it one to three times.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Removing the repeated 'you can' and simplifying the phrase improves clarity and grammar.