Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar sentence gulo natural na. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jate answer ta shunte natural lage. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun 3-4 sentence e shundor vabe express korte.

Example: Yes, I like shopping very much. I enjoy buying new clothes and shoes because it makes me feel happy and confident.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache ar grammar mistake o ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar logical sentence banate, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta coherent hoy. Apni specific example dite paren jemon keno apni price compare koren.

Example: I usually compare prices when I shop because if I have enough money, I buy what I like. But if my budget is limited, I look for cheaper options to save money.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e grammar ar sentence structure khub important. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because' jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni specific karon dite paren keno apnar jonno choice kora sohoj.

Example: No, it is not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I prefer shopping alone. This way, I feel comfortable and can decide easily what to buy.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary problem ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar natural sentence use korte. Apni opinion express korar somoy specific karon dite paren ar linking words use korte. Apni example dite paren jate answer ta bhalo hoy.

Example: I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they have higher quality and more features. However, sometimes cheaper products can be attractive because of their price.

× Obviously I like shopping and.

✓ Obviously, I like shopping.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction that requires a following clause. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I purchasing new cloth, new shoes and it's filled me better to me.

✓ I purchase new clothes and new shoes, and it makes me feel better.

'Purchasing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb; 'purchase' is the correct simple present form here. 'Cloth' should be plural 'clothes'. 'It's filled me better to me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it makes me feel better'.

× Is Eli.

✓ No correction possible due to unclear meaning.

The phrase 'Is Eli.' is unclear and does not form a proper sentence. It may be a transcription error or incomplete thought.

× I don't compare, but most of the time I compare prices.

✓ I don't always compare, but most of the time I compare prices.

The sentence is contradictory; adding 'always' clarifies the meaning that sometimes the student does not compare prices.

× In shop because when I have.

✓ In shops, because when I have enough money,

The phrase is incomplete and lacks proper structure. Adding 'enough money' completes the thought.

× I purchasing new cloth, new shoes and it's filled me better to me.

✓ I purchase new clothes and new shoes, and it makes me feel better.

'Cloth' should be plural 'clothes' when referring to garments. Also, 'purchasing' should be 'purchase' in simple present tense.

× when I have not that types of money I cannot buy this.

✓ When I don't have that type of money, I cannot buy this.

'Have not' is incorrect; 'don't have' is the correct negative form. 'Types' should be singular 'type' to match 'that'.

× when I have no. Enough money.

✓ when I have no enough money.

The phrase 'no enough money' is incorrect; it should be 'not enough money' or 'no money'.

× I prefer to shopping alone and it gives me more comfort when I buy an part when I purchasing new cloth, new shoes at Septra and I feel comfort when I ordered this and that's why.

✓ I prefer shopping alone and it gives me more comfort when I buy parts or when I purchase new clothes and new shoes at Septra, and I feel comfortable when I order these, and that's why.

'Prefer to shopping' should be 'prefer shopping'. 'Purchasing' should be 'purchase' in simple present. 'Comfort' should be 'comfortable' as an adjective. 'Ordered' should be 'order' to match present tense.

× I feel comfort when I ordered this and that's why.

✓ I feel comfortable when I order these, and that's why.

'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective 'comfortable' is needed here. 'Ordered' is past tense; 'order' fits better with the present context. 'This' should be 'these' to refer to plural items.

× I don't think it's not difficult for me.

✓ I don't think it's difficult for me.

Double negatives 'don't think' and 'not difficult' create confusion. Removing 'not' clarifies the meaning.

× Obviously expensive things or ribs.

✓ Obviously, expensive things are better.

'Or ribs' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence should clearly state the opinion about expensive things.

× Expensive products are always better. Then the cheaper one because.

✓ Expensive products are always better than the cheaper ones because

'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'One' should be plural 'ones' to match 'products'.

× Every product has different quality, expensive things has different quality and facilities.

✓ Every product has different quality; expensive things have different quality and features.

'Things' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. 'Facilities' is better replaced with 'features' in this context.

× However cheapest. And cheaper one is the most attractive thing.

✓ However, the cheapest and cheaper ones are the most attractive things.

The sentence fragments need to be combined properly. 'Cheapest' needs 'the' before it. 'One' should be plural 'ones' to match 'things'.