Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: حاول استخدام تعبيرات أكثر طبيعية وصحيحة لغويًا، وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية مثل 'I'm not just like shopping'. يمكنك قول 'I really like shopping' أو 'I'm quite obsessed with shopping'.

Example: I really enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore new styles and find great deals.

Suggestion: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة بشكل أفضل. مثلاً، استخدم 'because' و 'so' بشكل صحيح، وقل 'I compare prices because I want to be responsible with my money.'

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to manage my budget wisely, so I often check different stores to find cheaper options.

Suggestion: حاول استخدام جمل كاملة وواضحة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي. بدلاً من 'so difficult for me' قل 'It is difficult for me'. واستخدم 'because' لربط السبب. كما يجب استخدام ضمائر متناسقة.

Example: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping, especially for clothes, because I like many styles and I am unsure which colors suit me best.

Suggestion: حاول التعبير بشكل أكثر رسمية وطبيعية، وتجنب استخدام كلمات مثل 'dumb'. استخدم عبارات مثل 'I believe' و 'in my opinion'. كما استخدم ربط الجمل بشكل أفضل.

Example: In my opinion, the only difference between expensive and cheaper products is the price. For example, when buying makeup, you can find products with similar quality and effects at a lower price if you search carefully.

× I'm not just like shopping.

✓ I don't just like shopping.

The phrase 'not just like' is incorrect. The correct negative form is 'don't just like' to express that the liking is not limited to just shopping.

× I'm so obsessed and addiction on it.

✓ I'm so obsessed with it and addicted to it.

'Addiction' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective 'addicted'. Also, the correct prepositions are 'obsessed with' and 'addicted to'.

× I always compare about the price because I need to be responsible about my money.

✓ I always compare the price because I need to be responsible with my money.

The verb 'compare' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'responsible with' is the correct preposition to use with 'responsible' in this context.

× if I go to search to another store, I will find it more cheap, I think.

✓ if I go to search in another store, I will find it cheaper, I think.

The correct preposition after 'search' is 'in'. Also, 'more cheap' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'cheaper'.

× Yeah, so difficult for me, especially if you wanna buy clothes and because I have many type of styles so I don't know what I choose to buy and what color is good for me.

✓ Yeah, it's so difficult for me, especially when I want to buy clothes because I have many types of styles, so I don't know what to choose to buy and which color is good for me.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb in the first part ('so difficult for me'). 'Wanna' should be 'want to' for formal speech. 'Many type' should be 'many types'. Also, 'what I choose to buy' should be 'what to choose to buy', and 'what color is good' should be 'which color is good'.

× The only difference between them the price.

✓ The only difference between them is the price.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement.

× if you search more you will find product like the same effect, like the same quality but on a cheaper price.

✓ if you search more, you will find products with the same effect, the same quality but at a cheaper price.

'Product' should be plural 'products'. The correct preposition is 'with' for 'same effect' and 'same quality'. Also, 'on a cheaper price' should be 'at a cheaper price'.