Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas like 'relax my mind' and 'stressbuster' which mean the same. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and keeps me updated with the latest fashion trends.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to avoid repetition of 'sometimes' and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and logically.

Example: Yes, I often compare prices because some shopkeepers may overcharge, so I check other shops to find better deals.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct your grammar. Use linking words to explain your situation clearly.

Example: Yes, sometimes I find it hard to choose between products when shopping alone, so I ask my mother for help to decide.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to compare effectively.

Example: I think expensive products are usually better in quality than cheaper ones, which often need to be replaced sooner.

× sometimes shopping act as a stressbuster for me

✓ sometimes shopping acts as a stressbuster for me

The subject 'shopping' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'acts' instead of 'act'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× I compare price sometimes

✓ I compare prices sometimes

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items or shops. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about comparing prices in general.

× And if I talk about comparing, I used to compare with other shops and.

✓ And if I talk about comparing, I compare with other shops.

The phrase 'I used to compare' suggests a past habit, but the context implies a current habit, so 'I compare' is correct. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete and needs to be removed for proper sentence structure.

× sometimes I got confused between two products

✓ sometimes I get confused between two products

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'get' should be used instead of the past tense 'got'. Using past tense here is incorrect for habitual actions.

× Then I asked my mother to help me to chapter choose the product

✓ Then I asked my mother to help me choose the product

The word 'chapter' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Also, the infinitive form 'to choose' is correct after 'help me'. The preposition 'to' before 'choose' is optional but 'chapter' is a mistake.

× sometimes expensive products are more go better than cheaper ones

✓ sometimes expensive products are better than cheaper ones

The phrase 'more go better' is incorrect. The correct comparative form is simply 'better'. The word 'go' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× cheaper ones are in cheap quality which we have to change after sometimes

✓ cheaper ones are of poor quality which we have to replace after some time

The phrase 'in cheap quality' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' and 'poor quality' is the appropriate adjective phrase. Also, 'change after sometimes' is awkward; 'replace after some time' is clearer and grammatically correct.