Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit short and slightly unnatural with the phrase 'It is a good deal' which is vague here. Try to be more specific about why you like shopping and avoid ambiguous expressions. Also, add a linking phrase to make your answer flow better.

Example: Yes, I love shopping in my spare time because it helps me relax and find good bargains. Usually, I go with my friends or family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer has good points but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'and every person I think so should be' and 'It is very necessary thing for a person.' Try to use clearer, more natural sentences and include linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, definitely. I like to save money, so I compare prices both online and in stores. I believe everyone should do this because it's important to make smart purchases.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes such as 'picking things so it's very difficult task' and 'they choose things for me it's and make things easier.' Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas more clearly.

Example: Yes, sometimes it's difficult to choose what to buy because there are many options. That's why I prefer shopping with my family and friends, as they help me make better decisions and make the process easier.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your opinion clearly. Avoid starting sentences with 'so' in this context and try to provide specific reasons or examples.

Example: Yes, I think expensive products usually have better quality compared to cheaper ones. For example, they often last longer and come with better customer service.

× I compare prices both online and offline and every person I think so should be.

✓ I compare prices both online and offline, and I think every person should do so.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and lacks clarity. 'Every person I think so should be' is incorrect; it should be 'I think every person should do so' to correctly use pronouns and convey the intended meaning.

× It is very necessary thing for a person.

✓ It is a very necessary thing for a person.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very necessary thing'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article, so 'a very necessary thing' is correct.

× Yes, sometimes picking things so it's very difficult task.

✓ Yes, sometimes picking things is a very difficult task.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb and has incorrect structure. 'Picking things so it's very difficult task' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence includes the verb 'is' and the article 'a' to form a proper sentence.

× That's why I always prefer my family and friends to go shopping with me because they choose things for me it's and make things easier.

✓ That's why I always prefer my family and friends to go shopping with me because they choose things for me and make things easier.

The phrase 'it's and make things easier' is incorrect and confusing. Removing 'it's' clarifies the sentence and correctly uses pronouns to express that family and friends help in choosing things and make shopping easier.