Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons or examples. For example, instead of 'I always very curious for buying things', say 'Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relieve stress and express my personality.'

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relieve stress and express my personality. For instance, I like choosing clothes that reflect my style and also buy gifts for my family.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary. For example, say 'I usually focus on the quality and material of the product rather than the price. However, I avoid very expensive items to manage my budget effectively.'

Example: I usually focus on the quality and material of the product rather than the price. However, I avoid very expensive items because they can strain my budget and affect my other expenses.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to choose colors and sizes because fashion trends keep changing. For instance, some people prefer bulky clothes while others like skin-fit or oversized styles, which confuses me.'

Example: Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to choose colors and sizes because fashion trends keep changing. For instance, some people prefer bulky clothes while others like skin-fit or oversized styles, which confuses me.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to organize your points logically. For example, say 'I don't think expensive products are always better. It depends on the quality and comfort. Sometimes cheaper products can be better than expensive ones, but often expensive clothes offer better quality.'

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better. It depends on the quality and comfort. Sometimes cheaper products can be better than expensive ones, but often expensive clothes offer better quality.

× I always very curious for buying things for myself as well As for my kit and kings.

✓ I am always very curious about buying things for myself as well as for my kit and kings.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'curious'. The correct preposition is 'about'. Also, 'as well As' should be 'as well as' with correct capitalization.

× It gave me more chance to show my personality with my near and dear ones.

✓ It gives me more chance to show my personality with my near and dear ones.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'gives' is appropriate instead of past tense 'gave'.

× Whenever I'm going for shopping I always check this stuff and the material and the product which I want to buy.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I always check the stuff, the material, and the product which I want to buy.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list.

× I never check the price is it cheap or is it expensive?

✓ I never check whether the price is cheap or expensive.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Whether' is needed to introduce the indirect question, and the sentence should be rephrased for clarity.

× But I'm not always go for too much expensive because at that time if I purchase too much expensive things so it burn hole in my pocket and I have to manage my another stuff and expenses as well with that money.

✓ But I don't always go for very expensive things because if I purchase very expensive things, it burns a hole in my pocket and I have to manage my other stuff and expenses with that money.

The verb form 'go' needs 'do' for negation in present tense. 'Too much expensive' is incorrect; 'very expensive' is correct. 'Burn' should be 'burns' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Another' should be 'other' when referring to plural 'stuff and expenses'.

× Yeah, sometime, yes, when I check this stuff and the material, sometimes it's very difficult for me to choose the colors and the size because the trend goes always change.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, yes, when I check the stuff and the material, sometimes it's very difficult for me to choose the colors and the size because the trends always change.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Trend' should be plural 'trends' because multiple trends change. 'Goes always change' is incorrect; correct is 'always change'.

× Sometimes people like to prefer the bulky clothes, whereas sometimes people usually like to buy the skin fit clothes as well as the oversized.

✓ Sometimes people prefer bulky clothes, while sometimes they usually like to buy skin-fit clothes as well as oversized ones.

'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' suffices. 'Whereas' can be replaced with 'while' for smoother contrast. 'Skin fit' should be hyphenated as 'skin-fit'. 'Oversized' should be followed by a noun or 'ones'.

× At that time, I'm a little bit confused about.

✓ At that time, I'm a little bit confused about it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'about' requires an object, so 'it' is added to complete the thought.

× According to me, no one can always need to check the quality of the product as well as the stuff and the is it comfortable for you or not.

✓ According to me, one always needs to check the quality of the product as well as whether it is comfortable for you or not.

'No one can always need' is incorrect; 'one always needs' is correct. 'The is it comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'whether it is comfortable'.

× According to me, it's depend on the product as well as on the market.

✓ According to me, it depends on the product as well as on the market.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with subject 'it'.

× Sometimes the cheaper product is more good as compared to expensive clothes.

✓ Sometimes the cheaper product is better compared to expensive clothes.

'More good' is incorrect; the comparative form 'better' should be used.

× However, the expensive clothes are a lot of time.

✓ However, expensive clothes are often good quality.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to convey a meaningful idea.

× Majority of time they are good for individual.

✓ Most of the time, they are good for individuals.

'Majority of time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match context.