Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid filler words, and keep your sentences concise and grammatically correct. Also, avoid unrelated phrases like "to drink."

Example: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it is my favorite hobby and it makes me feel happy. Whenever I go shopping, I like to look at many items and sometimes buy things that catch my eye.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrasing and filler words. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because sometimes the same product can be more expensive in big malls, while smaller shops often offer cheaper prices. Therefore, comparing helps me save money.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be specific about how you make decisions when shopping.

Example: Yes, it is often difficult for me to choose when there are many options. In such cases, I usually ask my friends for advice about what suits me best, which helps me make a better decision.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the main idea but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Sometimes cheaper products have the same quality, but they are sold at lower prices. Therefore, price does not always reflect quality.

× Is of course, as I like shopping, sopping is my favorite hobby to drink and it's make me feel so happy.

✓ Of course, I like shopping; shopping is my favorite hobby and it makes me feel so happy.

The original sentence has a typo ('sopping' instead of 'shopping') and incorrect verb forms ('it's make' should be 'it makes'). The verb 'make' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'to drink' is incorrect in this context and should be removed.

× And whenever I do shopping, uh, I like everything and I buy everything.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I like everything and I buy everything.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here.

× What I, my eyes catch.

✓ Whatever my eyes catch.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Whatever my eyes catch' is the correct phrase to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, of course I compare prices, uh, because it's, uh, some some time if we are buying that same thing, you know, mall that it's going to be a so pricey and also if we are going to buy that things in a small place we found cheaper.

✓ Yes, of course I compare prices because sometimes if we are buying the same thing at a mall, it is going to be so pricey, and also if we buy those things in a small place, we find them cheaper.

The sentence has plural and singular noun agreement issues ('that things' should be 'those things'), article misuse ('a so pricey' should be 'so pricey'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, of course it's very difficult for me to choose is one thing.

✓ Yes, of course it's very difficult for me to choose one thing.

The phrase 'choose is one thing' is incorrect; 'is' should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× If I have lots of option and I don't know how what kind of things I wanna choose and I ask for others to who is goes well on me.

✓ If I have lots of options and I don't know what kind of things I want to choose, I ask others who know what looks good on me.

The sentence has pluralization errors ('option' should be 'options'), incorrect pronoun use ('to who is goes well on me' is incorrect), and informal language ('wanna' should be 'want to'). Correcting these improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× So that's helped me well.

✓ So that helps me well.

The phrase 'that's helped me well' is awkward and incorrect in this context. 'That helps me well' is a better expression to indicate ongoing assistance.

× No, I don't think so that uh, because expensive products are not always better because sometimes they provide us uh, same quality, like a cheaper, they sell them on expensive prices.

✓ No, I don't think so because expensive products are not always better; sometimes they provide the same quality as cheaper ones but are sold at expensive prices.

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions ('so that uh, because'), awkward phrasing, and incorrect article use ('like a cheaper'). The correction improves sentence flow and grammatical accuracy.

× So I don't think it's sometime.

✓ So I don't think so sometimes.

The phrase 'it's sometime' is incorrect; 'sometimes' is the correct adverb to express occasional occurrence. Also, 'I don't think so sometimes' better conveys the intended meaning.