Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and reduce redundancy such as repeating 'fresh'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, instead of saying 'as possible as I can', you can say 'as much as I can'.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy grocery shopping because I can choose fresh produce and the best ingredients for my family. It gives me a sense of fulfillment to take care of their needs, even in small ways.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some repetition ('different different stores') and could be more concise. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, use 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons.

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices because some shopkeepers might overcharge customers. Therefore, I check prices at different stores to make sure I get the best deal.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but try to avoid redundancy such as 'pre predetermined' (just 'predetermined' is enough). Also, linking words like 'because' can improve coherence.

Example: I don't find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I usually have a predetermined list of items to buy, and I rarely purchase anything beyond that.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors such as 'has' instead of 'have' and 'pre paying' instead of 'prepaying' or 'paying'. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly.

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can be of better quality. However, if you pay a high price for something like facial cream, it usually contains rare ingredients that justify the cost.

× Yes, I really enjoy going to the grocery shopping as I have the option to pick out the fresh, umm, fresh produce for my family.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy going grocery shopping as I have the option to pick out fresh, umm, fresh produce for my family.

The phrase 'going to the grocery shopping' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the'. The correct expression is 'going grocery shopping' without 'the'. This is because 'grocery shopping' is an uncountable activity, not a specific place or event requiring 'the'.

× So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices with a different different stores whenever I go shopping.

✓ So as a consumer it is very important that I compare prices at different stores whenever I go shopping.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to comparing prices across different stores. Also, 'different different' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'different'.

× I don't think I find it difficult making choices whenever I go shopping.

✓ I don't think I find it difficult to make choices whenever I go shopping.

The verb 'find' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making' in this context. Using 'to make' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× Usually I have a pre predetermined list of the items that I want to purchase and very rarely I purchase any items beyond the list.

✓ Usually I have a predetermined list of items that I want to purchase and very rarely do I purchase any items beyond the list.

The phrase 'a pre predetermined' should be 'a predetermined' as 'pre' is redundant. Also, 'the items' is better as 'items' here because the list is general, not specific items previously mentioned. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'do' for emphasis in 'very rarely do I purchase'.

× I don't think expensive products has ever been better than the cheaper ones.

✓ I don't think expensive products have ever been better than the cheaper ones.

The subject 'products' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× Sometimes the cheaper ones might be better than the expensive ones.

✓ Sometimes cheaper products might be better than expensive ones.

Using 'the cheaper ones' and 'the expensive ones' is acceptable but can be improved by specifying 'cheaper products' and 'expensive ones' for clarity and style.

× But if you're pre paying a very highly price for something for example a facial cream, then there must be some ingredients which is very rare and.

✓ But if you're prepaying a very high price for something, for example, a facial cream, then there must be some ingredients which are very rare.

The word 'pre paying' should be 'prepaying' as one word. 'Very highly price' is incorrect; it should be 'very high price'. The clause 'which is very rare' should use 'are' to agree with the plural 'ingredients'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.