Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'shoppings' nên là 'shopping', và 'boost' nên chia đúng thì. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it helps me relieve stress and boosts my energy.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ lóng như 'kinda' và 'cheap price'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp để nối các ý.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices between different shops to find the cheapest option. Although it takes some time, it helps me save money.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'that's make me' nên là 'that makes me'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'shop legit'.

Example: Yes, I am quite strict when shopping, so I always check the price and whether the shop is reliable before buying, which makes me spend a lot of time shopping.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'from my instant' nên là 'in my opinion', 'none the the' là lỗi đánh máy. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy, tránh dùng từ thừa và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: In my opinion, expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, affordable items can offer good quality at a better price.

× I really like shoppings, it helped me a lot to reduce my stress and it also boost my energy a lot.

✓ I really like shopping, it helps me a lot to reduce my stress and it also boosts my energy a lot.

The word 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'shoppings'. Also, the verbs 'helped' and 'boost' need to agree with the present tense subject 'I' and 'it', so they should be 'helps' and 'boosts'.

× I always compare the price of the item between many shops to choose the cheapest 1 and although that take kinda much time but I can buy the cheap price so that's good though.

✓ I always compare the prices of items between many shops to choose the cheapest one, and although that takes quite a lot of time, I can buy at a cheap price so that's good though.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple shops are compared. 'Item' should be plural 'items' to match the context. 'Cheapest 1' should be 'cheapest one'. The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. 'Kinda much time' is informal and should be 'quite a lot of time'. 'Buy the cheap price' is incorrect; it should be 'buy at a cheap price'.

× Yes, I am a very strict person about shopping so I always check the price and the shop legit before buying some things from that store and that's make me to spend too much of time for shopping.

✓ Yes, I am a very strict person about shopping so I always check the price and whether the shop is legit before buying some things from that store and that makes me spend too much time shopping.

'Shop legit' is incorrect; it should be 'whether the shop is legit'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. 'Make me to spend' should be 'makes me spend'. 'Too much of time' should be 'too much time'. 'For shopping' is better as 'shopping' here.

× Umm, from my instant, the expensive items uh, do not always offer a really good qualities, but none the the affordable item can umm uh, offer a really good quality and also better price.

✓ Umm, from my experience, the expensive items do not always offer really good quality, but none of the affordable items can offer really good quality and also a better price.

'Instant' should be 'experience'. 'A really good qualities' is incorrect; 'qualities' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. 'None the the' is a typo and should be 'none of the'. 'Affordable item' should be plural 'affordable items' to match 'none of the'. 'Better price' should be preceded by 'a' as 'a better price'.