Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use complete sentences and correct prepositions, and avoid vague expressions like "It's exactly to find good idea." Also, keep your answer concise and coherent by linking ideas properly.

Example: Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to discover new items and try them out. Additionally, I enjoy shopping with friends, which makes it a social event. It’s a great way to find good ideas for gifts or personal use.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question directly but has some grammatical mistakes and could be more natural. Use plural forms correctly (prices), and improve sentence flow by linking ideas. Also, explain your reasoning a bit more to enrich your answer.

Example: No, I usually don't compare prices because I don't have much time. Instead, I prefer to shop at the same store where I know the prices are fair and I trust the brands they sell.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "a least a trust card and brand." Try to use complete sentences and clarify your points. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: No, it's not hard for me to make choices when shopping because I usually know what I want before I go. Moreover, I stick to trusted brands, so I don't need to spend much time deciding.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but has some grammatical errors (singular/plural agreement) and could be more natural. Use linking words like "because" or "since" to explain your opinion more effectively.

Example: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name. In fact, there are cheaper products that work just as well.

× Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find a new thing and try.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it's fun to find a new thing and try it.

The verb 'try' requires an object here to complete the meaning. Adding 'it' clarifies what is being tried, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× I also enjoy with friends and making it a social event.

✓ I also enjoy shopping with friends and making it a social event.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed directly by a gerund or noun phrase. 'Enjoy with friends' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy shopping with friends' to specify the activity.

× It's exactly to find good idea.

✓ It's exciting to find a good idea.

The word 'exactly' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'exciting'. Also, 'good idea' needs an article 'a' before it.

× No, I don't compare price because I don't have time.

✓ No, I don't compare prices because I don't have time.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' when referring to multiple items or general comparison.

× I prefer to shop at the same store when I know the price are fair and I trust the brand I buy.

✓ I prefer to shop at the same store when I know the prices are fair and I trust the brand I buy.

The subject 'prices' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' to agree in number. Also, 'price' should be plural to match the context.

× No, it's not hard for me to make choice when shopping.

✓ No, it's not hard for me to make choices when shopping.

The noun 'choice' should be plural 'choices' because it refers to multiple options when shopping.

× Usually know what I want before I go and I stick to a least a trust card and brand so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

✓ I usually know what I want before I go, and I stick to at least a trusted card and brand so I don't need to spend much time choosing.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. 'a least' should be 'at least'. 'trust card' should be 'trusted card' to correctly use the adjective form.

× I don't think expensive product are always better.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better.

The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural verb 'are' and the general statement.

× Sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name and they are cheaper product that's worked just as well.

✓ Sometimes you are just paying for the brand's name, and there are cheaper products that work just as well.

'They are' is incorrect here; 'there are' is needed to indicate existence. 'product' should be plural 'products' to match 'cheaper'. 'that's worked' should be 'that work' to agree with plural 'products' and present tense.