Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答自然且内容丰富，但句子较长，建议适当简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I'm feeling down. I like to treat myself to small gifts, such as books or clothes, because they help lift my spirits.

Suggestion: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，使用了连接词“especially”和“for example”，但可以增加更多细节描述以丰富内容。

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop, especially during holidays like Double 11, because many stores offer promotions. For example, I check various online shops to find the best discounts and save money.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误（如“who exactly know”应为“who exactly knows”），建议注意主谓一致，同时句子衔接略显生硬，可使用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices. I usually know exactly what I want, so I pick my favorite product first and then ask the salesperson about the price.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清，缺少具体细节和逻辑连接，建议补充完整观点并提供具体例子，同时避免绝对化的判断。

Example: I think expensive products are often better because they usually have higher quality. For example, cheap products in some stores may not last as long or work as well as more expensive ones.

× I'm just the kind of person who exactly know what I want.

✓ I'm just the kind of person who exactly knows what I want.

这里的关系代词who指代的是单数person，因此谓语动词know应使用第三人称单数形式knows，保证主谓一致。

× However, those products are always.

✓ However, those products are always cheap.

句子缺少谓语部分，导致句子不完整。应补充完整谓语，使句子表达完整明确。