Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: I enjoy shopping sometimes, especially when I find unique products. However, I often feel bored in cosmetics shops because many lipsticks look very similar in colour, which makes shopping less exciting for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is a bit confusing. Make sure to use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly and provide specific details.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because a higher price does not always mean better quality. For example, some expensive products might not be worth the cost, so I try to find the best value for my money.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks a clear topic sentence and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons to support your answer.

Example: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices when shopping because shopkeepers often give a lot of information, and there are many varieties of products available. This can make it hard to decide which one to buy.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'some outliers' and focus on clear reasoning.

Example: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Although they are usually of higher quality, sometimes expensive items can have defects, especially if they are damaged during delivery.

× It depends actually when I walk through those cosmetics shop, like selling some lipsticks, from my perspective the color of those lipsticks are quite similar.

✓ It depends actually when I walk through those cosmetics shops, like selling some lipsticks, from my perspective the colours of those lipsticks are quite similar.

The word 'shop' should be plural 'shops' because it refers to multiple stores. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colours' to agree with 'those lipsticks' which is plural. This ensures subject and noun agreement in number.

× That's makes me dull.

✓ That makes me dull.

The contraction 'That's' (that is) is incorrect here because the subject 'That' requires the verb 'makes' without 'is'. The correct form is 'That makes me dull' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I will make comparisons between prices of the products as the products quality doesn't always directly proportional to the quality of the product.

✓ Yes, I will make comparisons between the prices of the products as the product's quality isn't always directly proportional to the price of the product.

The sentence has structural issues: 'products quality' should be possessive 'product's quality'; 'doesn't always directly proportional' lacks a verb and should be 'isn't always directly proportional'; also, 'quality of the product' should be contrasted with 'price' to make sense. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, is a bit difficult.

✓ Yes, it is a bit difficult.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'it' as the subject corrects the sentence structure, making it a complete sentence.

× Not only does the shopkeeper provide much information about the products, but also many varieties are present.

✓ Not only does the shopkeeper provide much information about the products, but there are also many varieties available.

The phrase 'many varieties are present' is awkward. Using 'there are also many varieties available' is more natural. Also, 'but also' should be preceded by 'there are' to complete the clause properly.