Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I do like" and use the correct plural form "jewelry" (uncountable). Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and add a linking phrase to enrich your response.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping because I like buying new clothes and jewelry. It’s a fun way to treat myself and update my wardrobe regularly.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and filler words like "umm" and repeated words "I I". Try to avoid these to sound more fluent. Also, use more natural expressions like "I have a limited budget" and avoid awkward phrases like "more cheaper" (just say "cheaper").

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I have a limited budget. Therefore, I try to find the most affordable items that fit my needs.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "when injured shop" and "in this, uh, shop particular shop." Avoid filler words like "uh" and try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Also, focus on your personal experience rather than generalizing about women.

Example: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I tend to be indecisive. Sometimes, I want to try many items and it’s hard to pick just one.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like "when I boats were ordered online." Try to use clearer sentences and avoid errors. Also, explain your opinion with a more logical structure and linking words.

Example: Yes, in many cases, expensive products are better because I have noticed that cheap items I ordered online often break quickly. Therefore, I believe higher price usually means better quality.

× Yes, I do like shopping since I love buying myself new items such as clothes or maybe jewelries.

✓ Yes, I do like shopping since I love buying myself new items such as clothes or maybe jewelry.

The word 'jewelries' is incorrect because 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'jewelry' instead of 'jewelries' is the correct usage.

× Yes I compare prices in shops because umm I try to find more affordable thing for me because I I don't have unlimited budget on my pockets so I try to find more cheaper item.

✓ Yes, I compare prices in shops because I try to find more affordable things for me since I don't have an unlimited budget in my pockets, so I try to find cheaper items.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'thing' and 'item' when referring to multiple objects. Also, 'more cheaper' is redundant; 'cheaper' alone suffices. Additionally, 'on my pockets' should be 'in my pockets'. These corrections improve quantifier and preposition usage.

× Yes, I believe it's hard mostly for women because I consider myself as indecisive in this case, because mostly women when injured shop at the first time and they want to try everything in this, uh, shop particular shop and want to buy everything that they like and it's difficult to pick only one.

✓ Yes, I believe it's mostly hard for women because I consider myself indecisive in this case. Mostly, women when they shop for the first time want to try everything in a particular shop and want to buy everything they like, so it's difficult to pick only one.

The original sentence is confusing and contains grammatical errors such as 'when injured shop' which is incorrect. The sentence structure is complex and unclear. Breaking it into shorter sentences and correcting phrases like 'shop at the first time' to 'shop for the first time' improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, in many situations because I experienced that when I boats were ordered online, cheap item usually break down in short time period.

✓ Yes, in many situations because I experienced that when I ordered boots online, cheap items usually break down in a short period of time.

The phrase 'when I boats were ordered online' is incorrect; it should be 'when I ordered boots online'. Also, 'cheap item' should be plural 'cheap items' to match the context. 'Break down' should be in present tense here as a general truth. Adding 'a' before 'short period of time' is necessary for correct article usage.

× Yes, in many situations because I experienced that when I boats were ordered online, cheap item usually break down in short time period.

✓ Yes, in many situations because I experienced that when I ordered boots online, cheap items usually break down in a short period of time.

The singular 'item' is incorrect when referring to multiple items; it should be plural 'items'. Also, 'boats' is a typo for 'boots'. The phrase 'short time period' requires the article 'a' before it.