Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why you enjoy shopping and how it affects your mood.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it makes me feel energetic and excited. I like discovering new items, and sometimes I shop to relieve boredom and relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words to make it more coherent. Also, provide a bit more detail about how comparing prices helps you.

Example: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I need to stick to my budget. By doing this, I can find the best deals and save money.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural by using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, be more specific about the difficulties you face and how you handle them, keeping your answer concise.

Example: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping because there are many sizes, colours, and designs that don't match my preferences. So, I often have to compromise and choose the closest option.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and improve fluency by structuring your answer with a clear opinion and supporting reasons. Use relevant vocabulary and be specific about why you think expensive products are better.

Example: Yes, I believe expensive products are usually better because branded companies use high-quality fabrics that suit all skin types and do not cause allergies.

× Yes, I like shopping because I found of uh, shopping, uh, some uh.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because I am fond of shopping.

The phrase 'found of' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fond of' followed by a noun or gerund. Here, 'shopping' is a gerund acting as a noun. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I feel energetic while I shop the new things umm and uh, sometime I shopping, I shop uh for get rid of my boring.

✓ I feel energetic while I shop for new things, and sometimes I shop to get rid of my boredom.

The phrase 'I shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'I shop' or 'I am shopping'. Also, 'for get rid of my boring' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to get rid of my boredom'. 'Boredom' is the noun form needed here. These corrections fix verb form and noun usage errors.

× sometimes I get different sizes, color and designs which are not according to my choice and I have to compromise with them.

✓ sometimes I get different sizes, colours, and designs which are not according to my choice, and I have to compromise with them.

When listing multiple items, all should be in plural form if referring to more than one. 'Color' should be 'colours' to match 'sizes' and 'designs'. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× branded company use always the best uh, fabric, which uh, uh, suits all type of skin and it uh, it is not a cause of any type of allergy.

✓ Branded companies always use the best fabric, which suits all types of skin and does not cause any type of allergy.

'Branded company' should be plural 'Branded companies' to match the plural verb 'use'. The adverb 'always' should come before the verb 'use'. 'All type of skin' should be 'all types of skin' to indicate variety. 'It is not a cause of any type of allergy' is better expressed as 'does not cause any type of allergy' for clarity and correctness.