Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'go to shopping' and 'Frequently, I also enjoy offline.' Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent by linking ideas properly.

Example: Yes, I love shopping. I often go shopping with my mom whenever I have free time. Besides that, I frequently buy groceries and household items online. I also enjoy shopping in physical stores sometimes.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'compare prices between the same product' and 'with a nice.' Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices of the same product when I shop because I believe it's important to balance quality and cost. This way, I can make sure I get good value for my money.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains redundancy and awkward phrasing such as 'whenever I'm going to shopping' and repeated use of 'confused.' Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I often find it difficult to make choices when shopping because I like many products but have to pick only one. This makes me hesitate about what to buy and what to leave behind.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are minor errors like 'cheaper 1' and some repetition. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating the same words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: No, I don't believe expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. When I shop, I consider both quality and price, and I choose items that offer good quality at a reasonable price.

× I often go to shopping with my mom whenever I get free time.

✓ I often go shopping with my mom whenever I get free time.

The verb 'go' is followed directly by the gerund form 'shopping' without the preposition 'to'. Using 'to' before 'shopping' is incorrect in this context.

× Moreover, I often buy online grocery and other household related products.

✓ Moreover, I often buy groceries online and other household-related products.

The phrase 'buy online grocery' is incorrect. 'Groceries' is the correct plural noun, and 'online' should be placed after the verb 'buy' to indicate the method of purchase. Also, 'household related' should be hyphenated as 'household-related' when used as an adjective.

× Frequently, I also enjoy offline.

✓ Frequently, I also enjoy shopping offline.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. The word 'offline' is an adverb and needs an object or activity to modify. Adding 'shopping' clarifies the meaning.

× I often compare prices between the same product whenever I go to shopping because I think it is important to consider both quality as well as quantity.

✓ I often compare prices of the same product whenever I go shopping because I think it is important to consider both quality and quantity.

The phrase 'compare prices between the same product' is incorrect; 'compare prices of the same product' is correct. Also, 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping'. The conjunction 'as well as' is better replaced with 'and' for parallelism.

× So I always compare the prices between the product so that what I get is of good quality with a nice.

✓ So I always compare the prices of the product so that what I get is of good quality and nice.

'Compare the prices between the product' is incorrect; it should be 'compare the prices of the product'. The phrase 'with a nice' is incomplete and unclear; replacing it with 'and nice' improves clarity.

× Yes, I am always very confused whenever I'm going to shopping because I like different products but I have to select one of them so it always makes me confused about what should I take or what should I let go.

✓ Yes, I am always very confused whenever I go shopping because I like different products but I have to select one of them, so it always makes me confused about what I should take or what I should let go.

'Going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma before 'so' and correcting the word order in 'what should I take' to 'what I should take'.

× No, I don't think that expensive products are always better than cheaper 1.

✓ No, I don't think that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

The word '1' is a typographical error and should be replaced with 'ones' to correctly refer to cheaper products.

× Instead, whenever I go to shop, I always look at the quality as well as the price of the product and I always choose a product with a better quality and reasonable price for me.

✓ Instead, whenever I go shopping, I always look at the quality as well as the price of the product and I always choose a product with better quality and a reasonable price for me.

'Go to shop' should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'a better quality' is incorrect because 'quality' is an uncountable noun; it should be 'better quality'. Adding 'a' before 'reasonable price' is necessary because 'price' is countable here.