Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and include one specific supporting detail. Use correct articles and plural forms (e.g., 'kinds', 'products are').

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I like trying different kinds of shops, for example local markets where products are fresh and affordable, and also modern malls for branded items.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and coherence. Give a clear reason, use linking words (because, so, for example), and finish your thought. Avoid incomplete sentences and vague phrases.

Example: Yes, I usually compare prices because different shops charge different amounts; for example, local markets often offer discounts, while large malls tend to be more expensive.

Suggestion: Clarify the topic sentence and correct mistakes. Replace awkward phrases (e.g., 'make twice myself') with natural expressions like 'decide' or 'make choices'. Add one specific example and a linking word to explain why.

Example: Yes, I often find it hard to decide what to buy because malls display items attractively; for example, nicely arranged clothes and window displays make many items tempting.

Suggestion: Good idea and structure; improve grammar and give a clearer example. Use linking words (because, for example) and compare specific attributes like durability or brand reputation.

Example: No, I don't think expensive items are always better because quality and value for money matter; for example, I once bought a locally made bag that was cheaper but lasted longer than an expensive brand-name bag.

× I love to explore different kind of places to shop.

✓ I love to explore different kinds of places to shop.

The noun 'kind' needs to be plural after 'different' when referring to multiple types. Use 'kinds' to agree with 'different' and indicate variety. Suggestion: use 'different kinds of' or 'different types of'.

× Whenever I need something I go to the local market because their product are so good and I'm so satisfied with them.

✓ Whenever I need something I go to the local market because their products are so good and I'm so satisfied with them.

'Product' should be plural 'products' to agree with plural demonstrative 'their' and the plural verb 'are'. Ensure noun number matches pronouns and verbs. Suggestion: use 'their products are' for grammatically correct agreement.

× I love shopping in mall.

✓ I love shopping in the mall.

The singular countable noun 'mall' requires a definite article when referring to a specific place type commonly visited. Use 'the mall' or 'malls' depending on meaning. Suggestion: say 'in the mall' or 'in malls'.

× Yes I compare price when I saw because we can find different prices in different places.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because we can find different prices in different places.

'Price' should be plural 'prices' to talk generally; 'saw' is incorrect verb for shopping context and should be 'shop'. Also add comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: use 'compare prices when I shop'.

× Like if we go to the local area people will discount price and in the large mall or in fancy mall. Your clothes are.

✓ For example, in local markets people often offer discounts, while in large or fancy malls your clothes are more expensive.

Original is fragmented and unclear. Fix sentence structure by connecting ideas: contrast local markets and large malls, use plural nouns ('malls', 'clothes'), and proper verbs ('offer discounts', 'are more expensive'). Suggestion: combine clauses with 'while' and use consistent plurality.

× Yet, yes, it's really difficult for me to make twice myself because whenever I go to the mall I saw everything and I love everything.

✓ Yes, it's really difficult for me to decide because whenever I go to the mall I see everything and I love everything.

'Make twice myself' is incorrect; use 'decide' or 'choose' to express making a choice. 'Saw' is past tense but context requires present simple 'see'. Remove unnecessary 'Yet'. Suggestion: use 'It's difficult for me to decide' and 'I see everything'.

× They decorate their things very properly and I'm so attracted to them, so it's difficult for me.

✓ Shops display their products very attractively and I'm very attracted to them, so it's difficult for me.

'They decorate their things' is informal and vague. Use 'shops display their products' or 'stores arrange their products'. 'Properly' is acceptable but 'attractively' better describes visual appeal. Suggestion: use 'display their products attractively'.

× I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper one because it depends on quality and value for money.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because it depends on quality and value for money.

'One' should be plural 'ones' to match 'products' and indicate cheaper products in general. Ensure parallel number between comparative items. Suggestion: use 'cheaper ones'.

× For example in some local area we found different things be good at a cheaper price comparing to the month.

✓ For example, in some local areas we find good items at cheaper prices compared to malls.

Original has incorrect verb forms and unclear comparison. Use present simple 'we find' to match general statement, pluralize 'areas' and 'items/prices', and clarify comparison target (likely 'malls' not 'the month'). Suggestion: 'we find good items at cheaper prices compared to malls.'