Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; nói câu ngắn gọn, trực tiếp, và tránh lặp từ. Nên dùng các danh từ cụ thể (e.g. accessories, cosmetics) thay vì cụm từ mơ hồ, và sửa các lỗi như 'go out and shopping' -> 'go out shopping'. Giữ câu không quá 5 câu và thêm liên từ phù hợp nếu cần mở rộng.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I often go shopping with my friends or my mother to buy clothes and cosmetics. We usually choose items that suit our style and make us feel more confident.

Suggestion: Sửa cấu trúc điều kiện và dùng thì phù hợp; nói rõ tần suất và lý do ngắn gọn. Thêm liên từ như 'because' hợp lý, tránh dùng quá nhiều mệnh đề dài. Trình bày ý theo cấu trúc chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ ngắn.

Example: Yes, I sometimes compare prices because I have a limited budget. If an item is within my budget, I will buy it, but if it is too expensive I will wait or look for cheaper alternatives.

Suggestion: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, chọn từ chính xác và rõ ràng (ví dụ 'dedicated' thay vì 'dedicate', 'hesitation' thay vì 'hydration'). Tránh dùng cấu trúc lộn xộn; trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn bằng một hoặc hai câu cụ thể nêu cách bạn ra quyết định.

Example: No, I don't find it difficult to choose. I usually go straight to a specialist shop that sells the exact product I want, so I can compare options quickly and make a decision without hesitation.

Suggestion: Cần rõ ràng hơn trong quan điểm và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. 'are usually safer or more effective' thay vì 'have a safety effective'). Tránh mơ hồ như 'something about it such as pen' — nêu ví dụ cụ thể khi so sánh. Bạn nên đưa ra ý cân bằng: đôi khi hàng đắt hơn tốt hơn, nhưng không phải luôn luôn.

Example: Not always. Expensive products are often safer or more effective for skincare, but cheaper items like pens or everyday household goods can work perfectly well. It depends on the product and the brand's quality.

× I always go out and shopping with my friends or my mother.

✓ I always go out shopping with my friends or my mother.

The verb pattern 'go out and shopping' incorrectly combines 'go' + 'and' + gerund. Use 'go out shopping' or 'go out and shop'. Suggestion: say 'go out shopping' to make the verb sequence correct.

× We like shopping for clothes, comic stick or some product make us even more beautiful.

✓ We like shopping for clothes, comic sticks, or other products that make us more beautiful.

Problems: missing plural form for 'comic stick' and missing relative clause grammar. Use plural 'comic sticks' or 'comics' and 'other products that make us more beautiful'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and include 'that' before the clause.

× I sometimes compare price when I shop because if the price were too much for my budget, I cannot buy it, but it's suitable for my budget, I will buy it with no hesitation.

✓ I sometimes compare prices when I shop because if the price is too high for my budget, I cannot buy it; but if it is suitable for my budget, I will buy it without hesitation.

Use plural 'prices' for general comparisons and correct conditionals/tense: use present simple 'is' for real situations instead of 'were'. Use 'too high' not 'too much' for price, and idiomatic 'without hesitation'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and correct conditional structure.

× Of course it's not a big problem because when I want to buy something, I can find a shop that dedicate to that product I want to buy and just straight to that shop and buy it with no hydration.

✓ Of course it's not a big problem because when I want to buy something, I can find a shop that is dedicated to that product and go straight to that shop and buy it without hesitation.

Multiple errors: 'that dedicate to' needs passive or adjective 'dedicated to'; 'just straight to that shop' needs verb 'go' and 'with no hydration' is wrong word — correct phrase is 'without hesitation'. Suggestion: use 'dedicated to', include necessary verbs, and use correct idioms.

× Maybe yes because the expensive products are usually have a safety effective to my body or my skin and the about the cheaper ones I'm sometimes buy it but something about it such as pen.

✓ Maybe yes, because expensive products usually have a protective effect on my body or skin. As for cheaper ones, I sometimes buy them, but they can have issues; for example, a pen might be low quality.

Errors: 'are usually have' is ungrammatical — use 'usually have'; 'a safety effective' should be 'a protective effect'; pronoun agreement and pluralization: 'cheaper ones' requires 'them' not 'it'; sentence structure unclear. Suggestion: use correct verb forms, choose correct nouns ('effect'), and match pronouns and number.