Shopping— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a complete, grammatical response that directly answers the question, begin with a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually go to shopping malls with my friends because we like to browse different stores together. I find it relaxing and a good way to spend free time.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, explain the reason using concise language and linking words (for example, because/so), and avoid unrelated phrases. Be specific about what you compare (brands, quality, discounts).

Example: Yes, I always compare prices because I need to stick to a budget. For example, I check different stores and online shops to see which brand gives the best quality for the price, especially when I buy clothes or electronics.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then give a short reason and a concrete example. Use appropriate linking words (because/so/therefore) and avoid awkward phrasing. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I don't find it difficult to choose when I shop because I decide quickly. For instance, if I see an item I like online, I compare a couple of reviews and then buy it without overthinking.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (however, but, for example) and avoid incomplete sentences. Mention aspects like quality, brand value, and durability.

Example: No, expensive products are not always better. While expensive items can have higher quality or better service, sometimes prices rise because of hype or branding; for example, a cheaper phone from a lesser-known brand may last as long as an expensive one if it has good reviews and build quality.

× Go to the malls for shopping with my friends and my friend.

✓ I go to the malls to shop with my friends.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses an awkward phrase 'for shopping' and redundant 'my friends and my friend'. Add subject 'I', change 'for shopping' to the verb infinitive 'to shop', and remove redundancy to make a clear, grammatical sentence.

× High compromises by when I, when I do shopping because, uh, I'm not that rich, so I have to compare all the prices, which things comes, which things are in my budget. I eat that once.

✓ I make lots of compromises when I shop because I'm not that rich, so I compare prices to see which things come within my budget. I buy those items.

The original contains multiple structural problems: misplaced words ('High compromises by when I'), repetition, incorrect verb forms ('comes'), and an unclear sentence 'I eat that once.' Reorganize into clear clauses: subject + verb ('I make lots of compromises'), use correct verb 'shop', use 'come within my budget' and replace unclear last sentence with 'I buy those items.' This fixes sentence structure and verb forms.

× No, because I'm a very cozy person, so whichever thing I have to buy, I choose it like a online fuss. And then I made-up my mind about it and then I purchased it.

✓ No, because I'm a very easygoing person, so whatever I need to buy, I choose it quickly online. Then I make up my mind and purchase it.

'Cozy' is an incorrect adjective for a person's temperament; 'easygoing' or 'comfortable' is appropriate. 'Whichever thing' is awkward; 'whatever I need to buy' is better. 'Like a online fuss' is incorrect adverbial phrase; use 'quickly online'. Tense consistency: change 'made-up my mind' and 'purchased' to present/future-consistent forms 'make up my mind' and 'purchase' to match the habitual present context.

× Products are not always good because sometimes some products are so hyped so their price is rising because of it.

✓ Products are not always good; sometimes items are overhyped, and their prices rise because of that.

The original is wordy and repetitive ('so hyped so', 'because of it'). Rephrase for clarity: use 'overhyped' and join clauses with appropriate connectors. Ensure subject-verb agreement and logical flow.

× I don't think sometimes cheaper products durability is much higher than the.

✓ I don't think cheaper products are always less durable; sometimes cheaper products are more durable than expensive ones.

The original sentence is incomplete ('than the.') and has incorrect noun phrase order ('cheaper products durability'). Use a clear comparative structure: 'cheaper products are more durable than expensive ones' or negate appropriately. This corrects missing comparator and noun phrase structure.