Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较长且信息丰富，但句子结构较复杂，缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I am currently a student majoring in law at Northwest University of Political Science and Law. I chose this major because I want to learn more about our country's legal system.

Sugerencia: 回答重复且冗长，开头的“as for your question”不自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复信息，表达更简洁。

Ejemplo: I don't work yet because I am still a postgraduate student studying at university.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇和口语化表达，语法错误影响表达清晰。建议避免重复，使用更正式的表达，并注意语法准确。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my university is a great place to study because the teachers are professional and share their own experiences, which is very helpful.

Sugerencia: 回答内容重复且语法错误明显，缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词连接句子，并注意语法一致性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love my university because it has many professional teachers who share their experiences, and I have many friends there.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点和理由，但“tackling with”用法不准确，且句子结构可以更自然。建议改进词汇使用和句子流畅度。

Ejemplo: I would like to become a lawyer because I enjoy solving difficult problems, which I find very challenging and rewarding.

× I am currently a student, my major is law and I study in the Northwest University of Political Science and Law and the reason I choose law as my major is that I want to learn more about the legal system of our country.

✓ I am currently a student. My major is law, and I study at the Northwest University of Political Science and Law. The reason I chose law as my major is that I want to learn more about the legal system of our country.

原句是一个长句，缺少适当的连接词和标点，导致句子结构混乱。应将长句拆分成几个短句，使用正确的连接词和标点，使表达更清晰。

× I study in the Northwest University of Political Science and Law

✓ I study at the Northwest University of Political Science and Law

表示在某个具体学校学习时，通常用介词'at'，而不是'in'。

× the reason I choose law as my major is that I want to learn more about the legal system of our country.

✓ the reason I chose law as my major is that I want to learn more about the legal system of our country.

这里描述的是过去做出的选择，动词应使用过去式'chose'，而不是现在式'choose'。

× As for your question, I am a student currently and I haven't finished my study as postgraduate student.

✓ As for your question, I am currently a student and I haven't finished my studies as a postgraduate student.

句子中'study'应为复数形式'studies'，且缺少冠词'a'，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I haven't finished my study as postgraduate student.

✓ I haven't finished my studies as a postgraduate student.

'postgraduate student'前应加不定冠词'a'，且'study'应为复数形式'studies'。

× I'm still learning at school.

✓ I'm still studying at school.

这里表达正在学习，动词用'study'更合适，'learning'通常指学习技能或知识的过程，但在此语境中用'studying'更自然。

× Yeah, I think my university is a good, good place to study knowledge because, you know, the teachers there are professional and they teach us knowledge depend on their own experiences.

✓ Yeah, I think my university is a good place to study because the teachers there are professional and they teach us based on their own experiences.

重复使用'good'不自然，'study knowledge'表达不准确，应简化为'study'。'depend on'应改为'based on'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× they teach us knowledge depend on their own experiences.

✓ they teach us knowledge based on their own experiences.

'depend on'应改为过去分词短语'based on'，表示依据。

× Yes, I love the university because there are lots of professional teachers who can teach us. The knowledge depend on their own experiences and I have lots of friends there.

✓ Yes, I love the university because there are lots of professional teachers who can teach us. The knowledge is based on their own experiences, and I have lots of friends there.

'The knowledge depend'缺少谓语动词，应加'is based on'，使句子完整。

× The knowledge depend on their own experiences

✓ The knowledge is based on their own experiences

'depend on'应改为被动语态'based on'，表示知识是基于他们的经验。

× I would like to become a lawyer because I think the process of tackling with the difficult problems is very challenging and I enjoy this so much.

✓ I would like to become a lawyer because I think the process of tackling difficult problems is very challenging and I enjoy this so much.

'tackling with'是不正确的搭配，应去掉'with'，直接用'tackling difficult problems'。