Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify the place name and purpose more effectively.

Ejemplo: I am currently a student studying at Sahin School in Denha, where I am improving my Dutch language skills.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and natural by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't work at the moment, but in the near future, I would like to work in a factory, possibly a chemical factory.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and coherence by organizing your ideas logically and using appropriate linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because it helps me gain experience related to my major, chemical engineering, which will benefit my future career and make me feel comfortable.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using correct verb forms and linking words to make your response more natural and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like it because it has a beautiful environment and it always motivates me to improve and work hard.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more concise by avoiding repetition and using proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Since I study chemical engineering, my future plan is to work in a factory, pharmacy, or any field related to chemistry because I want to work in my area of study.

× Actually currently I'm a student and I school in Denha which names Sahin to develop and enhance my Dutch language.

✓ Actually, currently I'm a student and I study in Denha, which is named Sahin, to develop and enhance my Dutch language.

The verb 'school' is incorrectly used as a verb here; the correct verb is 'study'. Also, 'which names Sahin' is incorrect; it should be 'which is named Sahin' to correctly describe the place. The pronoun and verb usage need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Actually I do not work currently, but in future.

✓ Actually, I do not work currently, but in the future.

The phrase 'in future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'in the future' when referring to a time period ahead.

× In the new future I prefer to work in a factories or maybe in a chemical factories.

✓ In the near future, I prefer to work in a factory or maybe in a chemical factory.

The phrase 'a factories' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'factories' is plural. It should be 'a factory'. Also, 'chemical factories' should be singular to match the singular article 'a'. Additionally, 'new future' is better expressed as 'near future'.

× Yes, it is actually a good and perfect place to work because it's helped me to increase and gain more experience about my major which is which is chemical engineering and it will help me to work in a place that I use and a doctorate.

✓ Yes, it is actually a good and perfect place to work because it has helped me to increase and gain more experience in my major, which is chemical engineering, and it will help me to work in a place where I can use my doctorate.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for correct present perfect tense. Also, 'about my major' should be 'in my major'. The phrase 'a place that I use and a doctorate' is unclear and corrected to 'a place where I can use my doctorate' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it will makes me feel relaxed.

✓ So it will make me feel relaxed.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. Therefore, 'will makes' is incorrect; it should be 'will make'.

× Yes, I really like it and I admire it also because it has a beautiful environment and it supports me, always motivate me always to be better and to work a lot.

✓ Yes, I really like it and I admire it also because it has a beautiful environment and it supports me, always motivates me to be better and to work hard.

The verb 'motivate' should be 'motivates' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'always motivate me always to be better and to work a lot' is awkward; corrected to 'always motivates me to be better and to work hard' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Since I study chemical engineering engineering, my future plans to work is in a factory or maybe in a pharmacy or any something or any field that contains chemistry because this is my major and I really love to work in my in something that I study it.

✓ Since I study chemical engineering, my future plan is to work in a factory or maybe in a pharmacy or any field that involves chemistry because this is my major and I really love to work in something that I have studied.

The phrase 'future plans to work is' has a subject-verb agreement issue; 'plans' is plural but 'is' is singular. Changed to 'future plan is'. Also, 'any something or any field' is incorrect; simplified to 'any field'. The phrase 'that contains chemistry' is better as 'that involves chemistry'. The ending 'that I study it' is incorrect; corrected to 'that I have studied'.