Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e direct question er uttor dite hobe, ar unnecessary repetition avoid korte hobe. Prothom line e 'Or are you a student?' bolte hobe na, karon eta examiner er question. Apni direct bole dite paren je apni student, tarpor kichu supporting details dite paren. Sentence gulo ke aro natural ar fluent korte hobe.

Ejemplo: I am a student studying accounting at Dhaka Commerce College, currently in my third year. I chose this subject because I want to become a CEO in the future. I find the course quite interesting and challenging.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'student' er plural form 'students' hobe, ar sentence structure aro natural korte hobe. Linking words use kore answer ke coherent korte paren. Example hisebe, 'Currently, I work as an English teacher, where I teach young students how to read, write, and speak English fluently. They are very eager to learn, and I really enjoy my job.'

Ejemplo: Currently, I work as an English teacher, where I teach young students how to read, write, and speak English fluently. They are very eager to learn, and I really enjoy my job.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e filler words (uh) onek beshi, ja naturalness komay. Apni clear ar direct uttor dite paren, ar linking words use kore sentence gulo ke logical korte paren. Example hisebe, 'Yes, it is a very good place to work because I feel happy teaching my students. Moreover, they are interested in learning how native speakers communicate.'

Ejemplo: Yes, it is a very good place to work because I feel happy teaching my students. Moreover, they are interested in learning how native speakers communicate.

Sugerencia: Apni bhalo kore answer diyechen, kintu kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'well equipment' er bodole 'well-equipped' hobe, ar 'quiet environment help' er bodole 'a quiet environment helps' hobe. Apni aro specific example dite paren. Example hisebe, 'Yes, I like my workplace because a comfortable and well-equipped environment boosts my productivity and motivation. For instance, natural light and a quiet atmosphere help me concentrate better.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because a comfortable and well-equipped environment boosts my productivity and motivation. For instance, natural light and a quiet atmosphere help me concentrate better.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e filler words onek beshi, ja naturalness komay. Apni direct ar clear uttor dite paren, ar linking words use korte paren. Example hisebe, 'In the future, I want to become an ACA, which stands for Associate Chartered Accountant. It is a respectable profession and offers great career opportunities.'

Ejemplo: In the future, I want to become an ACA, which stands for Associate Chartered Accountant. It is a respectable profession and offers great career opportunities.

× Or are you a student? I study accounting at Dhaka Commerce College and I'm in my third year now and I want to become a CEO in the future.

✓ I am a student. I study accounting at Dhaka Commerce College and I'm in my third year now and I want to become a CEO in the future.

The sentence 'Or are you a student?' is incorrect because the student is responding to the examiner's question, not asking it back. The pronoun usage is incorrect here. The correct response should affirm the student's status as a student.

× I teach student how to read, write and speak fluently in English.

✓ I teach students how to read, write and speak fluently in English.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because the teacher is referring to multiple learners. Using singular here is incorrect when talking about more than one person.

× Most of my students they are very young and they are very fascinated to learn about this language and I love my job.

✓ Most of my students are very young and they are very fascinated to learn about this language and I love my job.

The phrase 'Most of my students they are' is redundant. The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary because 'Most of my students' already serves as the subject.

× I think you say very good place, uh, to work, uh, because I feel happy whenever I, uh, teach my students and, uh, they're quite interested to learn how all native, uh, people work and, uh, native people communicate that.

✓ I think you can say it is a very good place to work because I feel happy whenever I teach my students and they are quite interested to learn how native people work and communicate.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition use. 'You say very good place' should be 'you can say it is a very good place'. Also, 'interested to learn' should be 'interested in learning'. The phrase 'native people communicate that' is unclear and corrected to 'native people work and communicate' for clarity.

× Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work and a comfortable and well equipment workplace can boost my production and motivation.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work, and a comfortable and well-equipped workplace can boost my productivity and motivation.

The sentence lacks a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Also, 'well equipment' should be 'well-equipped', and 'production' is better replaced with 'productivity' in this context.

× For example, having natural light and quiet environment help me focus better on my task.

✓ For example, having natural light and a quiet environment helps me focus better on my tasks.

'Quiet environment' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'having natural light and a quiet environment' considered as one unit. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to generalize the statement.

× Uh, in the future I want to become ACA, uh, which is a full form of chartered accountant.

✓ Uh, in the future I want to become an ACA, which is the full form of Chartered Accountant.

The article 'an' is needed before 'ACA' because it starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'the full form' is correct instead of 'a full form' because it refers to a specific expansion of the acronym. 'Chartered Accountant' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.