Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I work at a Japanese news agency, but currently, I am studying at a university in the UK to broaden my understanding of climate change and environmental issues, which I believe will benefit my career.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but the sentence structure could be improved for naturalness. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid listing without flow.

Ejemplo: I work in central Tokyo, near Tokyo Station, which is ideal because it allows me to travel easily to different areas and attend international conferences, as well as meet interviewees.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by varying vocabulary and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating 'fields' twice in close proximity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it's an excellent place to work because I can interact with specialists from diverse areas like science, politics, and the arts, which helps me expand my knowledge.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy working there because the company's reputation allows me to connect with a wide range of people, from politicians to scientists, which makes my job very rewarding.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors ('estimating' is incorrect, and 'another job opportunities' is ungrammatical). Try to use precise vocabulary and correct grammar, and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I plan to continue working as a journalist because I find it fulfilling to interact with experts in fields like politics and science; however, I am also considering exploring other job opportunities in the future.

× I currently work at the Japanese news agency, but now I am studying at an university in the UK as a temporary assignment because I have to broaden my perspective on climate change and environmental issues.

✓ I currently work at the Japanese news agency, but now I am studying at a university in the UK as a temporary assignment because I have to broaden my perspective on climate change and environmental issues.

The article 'an' is used before words that begin with a vowel sound. 'University' begins with a consonant sound 'yoo', so the correct article is 'a'. This is a common article usage error.

× My workplace is located in central Tokyo, which is very close to Tokyo Station.

✓ My workplace is located in central Tokyo, which is very close to Tokyo Station.

No correction needed here as the preposition 'in' and 'close to' are used correctly.

× I think this location is ideal for journalists because I can travel to various types of areas and the international conferences easily, and I can socialize with interviewees.

✓ I think this location is ideal for journalists because I can travel to various types of areas and international conferences easily, and I can socialize with interviewees.

The preposition 'the' before 'international conferences' is unnecessary here because it refers to conferences in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Yes, I really like my workplace because I can communicate with many people. Because of the well known name of my company, I can get in touch with some many people ranging from politicians to scientists, which makes my job more happy.

✓ Yes, I really like my workplace because I can communicate with many people. Because of the well-known name of my company, I can get in touch with so many people ranging from politicians to scientists, which makes my job happier.

The phrase 'some many people' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'so many people'. Also, 'well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective before a noun. Additionally, 'more happy' should be 'happier' as the comparative form of 'happy'.

× I want to work as a journalist for as long as possible because I find this profession both fulfilling and estimating since I can interact with many people in various specialties such as politics or science.

✓ I want to work as a journalist for as long as possible because I find this profession both fulfilling and stimulating since I can interact with many people in various specialties such as politics or science.

The word 'estimating' is incorrect in this context. The intended adjective is likely 'stimulating', which means exciting or interesting. 'Estimating' is a verb and does not fit here.

× But I have a plan to seek another job opportunities.

✓ But I have a plan to seek other job opportunities.

The phrase 'another job opportunities' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns. Since 'opportunities' is plural, the correct quantifier is 'other'.