Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu unnecessary repetition ache, ar kichu filler words (like 'uh') use korchen, ja natural English e avoid kora uchit. Apnar answer ke aro concise r effective korte, apni direct topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor supporting details add korun, jemon apnar study keno important. 5 sentence er moddhe answer complete korun.

Ejemplo: I am currently a full-time student pursuing a degree in Computer Science at university. This allows me to focus fully on gaining the knowledge and skills necessary for my future career in technology.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro logical r coherent korte paren. Also, apnar vocabulary aro relevant r specific korte hobe, jemon 'native campaigning' er bodole 'innovative marketing campaigns' use korte paren. Sentence gulo complete r clear korte hobe.

Ejemplo: I work at a marketing firm located in the city center. I enjoy this dynamic environment because it allows me to collaborate with creative professionals and develop innovative marketing campaigns. Additionally, the job offers flexible hours, which helps me maintain a good work-life balance.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu minor grammar mistakes ache, jemon 'opportunity' er age 'an' use kora uchit. Apni aro specific example dite paren jate answer ta aro strong hoy. Linking words use kore answer ke aro fluent korte paren.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive, which helps employees stay motivated. Additionally, the company offers good benefits and an opportunity for professional growth. For example, my colleagues often share positive experiences about the excellent work-life balance here.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu pronunciation or word choice error ache, jemon 'By tax' er bodole 'By text' or 'Yes' hote pare. 'Motivating motivation' phrase ta redundant. Apni simple r clear language use korun. Supporting details aro specific r relevant korte hobe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work. A comfortable and well-equipped workplace can significantly boost my productivity and motivation. For example, having natural light and a quiet environment helps me focus better on my tasks.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e onek grammar mistakes ache, jemon 'publish a career' er bodole 'pursue a career' hobe, 'professionate' er bodole 'passionate' hobe, 'thought' er bodole 'through' hobe, 'deputable' er bodole 'reputable' hobe. Apni sentence gulo ke simple, clear, ar grammatically correct korte hobe. Linking words use korun.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing because I am passionate about creativity and technology. I want to gain more experience through internships and online courses to develop my skills further. Ultimately, I hope to work for a reputable company in this field.

× I am I am currently a full time student pursuing my degree in Computer Science at university.

✓ I am currently a full-time student pursuing my degree in Computer Science at university.

The repetition of 'I am' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× Studying UH full time allows me to focus on gaining knowledge and skills that will help me uh my future career being.

✓ Studying full-time at UH allows me to focus on gaining knowledge and skills that will help me in my future career.

The sentence is fragmented and contains filler words like 'uh' and incorrect phrase 'career being'. The phrase 'Studying UH full time' is awkward; it should be 'Studying full-time at UH'. Also, 'help me uh my future career being' is incorrect and should be 'help me in my future career'.

× I work at a marketing firm located in the city center.

✓ I work for a marketing firm located in the city center.

The preposition 'at' is less appropriate here; 'work for' is commonly used to indicate employment with a company or firm.

× I enjoy dynamic environment because they are They are because it allows me to collaborate with creative professionals and develop native campaigning.

✓ I enjoy the dynamic environment because it allows me to collaborate with creative professionals and develop innovative campaigns.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'They are They are' is redundant and incorrect. 'Native campaigning' is likely a mistake; 'innovative campaigns' fits better. Also, 'environment' should be preceded by 'the'.

× The job also enforce flexible hours which helps me maintain.

✓ The job also enforces flexible hours which help me maintain balance.

The verb 'enforce' should be 'enforces' to agree with singular subject 'job'. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'hours'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'balance' clarifies the meaning.

× Additionally, the company offers good benefits and opportunity for professional growth.

✓ Additionally, the company offers good benefits and opportunities for professional growth.

'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match 'benefits' and to indicate multiple chances for growth.

× For example, my colleagues often share positive experience about the work life balance here.

✓ For example, my colleagues often share positive experiences about the work-life balance here.

'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'colleagues' and 'share'. Also, 'work life balance' should be hyphenated as 'work-life balance'.

× By tax, yes, I would definitely like the place where I work.

✓ By the way, yes, I would definitely like the place where I work.

'By tax' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'By the way' to introduce an additional comment.

× A comfortable and well equipped workplace can significantly boost my productivity and motivating motivation.

✓ A comfortable and well-equipped workplace can significantly boost my productivity and motivation.

'Well equipped' should be hyphenated as 'well-equipped'. 'Motivating motivation' is redundant; 'motivation' alone is correct.

× For example, having natural light and a quiet environment helps me focus better on my thoughts.

✓ For example, having natural light and a quiet environment helps me focus better.

'Focus better on my thoughts' is awkward; 'focus better' is sufficient and clearer.

× In the future, I plan to publish a career in digital marketing because I am professionate about creativity and technology.

✓ In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing because I am passionate about creativity and technology.

'Publish a career' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pursue a career'. 'Professionate' is not a word; the correct adjective is 'passionate'.

× I am to gain more experience, thought internship and online course to develop my skills further and ultimately I hope to work for a deputable.

✓ I aim to gain more experience through internships and online courses to develop my skills further, and ultimately I hope to work for a reputable company.

'I am to gain' is incorrect; 'I aim to gain' is correct. 'Thought' should be 'through'. 'Internship' and 'online course' should be plural. 'Deputable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'reputable'. The sentence is run-on and needs commas for clarity.