Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer deer temdeglelttei, todorhoi baidal heregtei. "I have graduated my university 2008" gesen ug helber buruu, "I graduated from university in 2008" gesen zohistoi. Mөн, ug helber, ug songolt, ug helber deer анхаарах хэрэгтэй. Илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөөрэй.

Ejemplo: I graduated from university in 2008. After that, I started working as an administrative translator in one of the biggest mining companies in Mongolia.

Sugerencia: Ug helber, ug songolt, ug helber deer анхаарах хэрэгтэй. "I am working as the mining industry" gesen ug helber buruu. Todorhoi, oilgomjtoi ug songoh heregtei. Mөн, холбоос ug ashiglan ug helberuudee holbootoi bolgoj, ug helber deer анхаараарай.

Ejemplo: As I mentioned before, I work in the mining industry, at a company located 200 kilometers from the capital city of Mongolia. The mine is surrounded by mountains, and I usually work in the office.

Sugerencia: Ug helber, ug songolt deer анхаарах хэрэгтэй. "my opposite" gesen ug oilgomjgui baina. "comfortable to working" gesen ug helber buruu. Илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөөрэй. Холбоос ug ashiglan ug helberuudee holbootoi bolgoj, ug helber deer анхаараарай.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely think it is a good place to work because it is very quiet and comfortable. Also, my job provides me with job security and opportunities for education.

Sugerencia: Ug helber deer анхаарах хэрэгтэй. "the because" gesen ug buruu. "So apparently to give a hand once I need the help" gesen ug oilgomjgui baina. Илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөөрэй. Холбоос ug ashiglan ug helberuudee holbootoi bolgoj, ug helber deer анхаараарай.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely like the place where I work because it is clean, spotless, and quiet. Also, my friends and colleagues are very helpful whenever I need assistance.

Sugerencia: Ug helber deer анхаарах хэрэгтэй. "working this company" gesen ug buruu, "working at this company" gesen zohistoi. "that helps me that my career growth" gesen ug oilgomjgui baina. Илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөөрэй. Холбоос ug ashiglan ug helberuudee holbootoi bolgoj, ug helber deer анхаараарай.

Ejemplo: In the upcoming years, I want to continue working at this company and pursue a master's degree in business administration, which will help my career growth. After that, I plan to apply for a manager position.

× I have graduated my university 2008.

✓ I graduated from my university in 2008.

The present perfect tense 'have graduated' is incorrectly used with a specific past time '2008'. The simple past tense 'graduated' should be used instead. Also, the preposition 'from' is needed after 'graduated'.

× I have graduated my university 2008.

✓ I graduated from my university in 2008.

The verb 'graduate' requires the preposition 'from' before the institution. Also, the time expression needs the preposition 'in'.

× After graduating I started working as a administration translator at the at mining industry which is one of the biggest mining in Mongolia.

✓ After graduating, I started working as an administration translator in the mining industry, which is one of the biggest mining industries in Mongolia.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound 'administration'. The phrase 'at the at mining industry' is incorrect; it should be 'in the mining industry'. Also, 'one of the biggest mining' is incomplete; it should be 'one of the biggest mining industries'.

× After graduating I started working as a administration translator at the at mining industry which is one of the biggest mining in Mongolia.

✓ After graduating, I started working as an administration translator in the mining industry, which is one of the biggest mining industries in Mongolia.

The correct preposition for working within an industry is 'in', not 'at'.

× As mentioned before, I am working as the mining industry and will yeah which is located 200 kilometers from capital city of Mongolia and that mining surrounded the mountains and I usually working in the office.

✓ As mentioned before, I am working in the mining industry, which is located 200 kilometers from the capital city of Mongolia. The mine is surrounded by mountains, and I usually work in the office.

The phrase 'working as the mining industry' is incorrect; it should be 'working in the mining industry'. 'Will yeah' is unclear and removed. 'Capital city' needs the definite article 'the'. 'That mining surrounded the mountains' should be 'The mine is surrounded by mountains'. 'I usually working' should be 'I usually work'.

× I usually working in the office.

✓ I usually work in the office.

The verb 'working' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The simple present tense 'work' is correct here.

× Yes, I definitely say it's good place to work.

✓ Yes, I definitely say it's a good place to work.

The noun phrase 'good place' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× ...very quiet and comfortable to working...

✓ ...very quiet and comfortable to work...

After 'comfortable to', the base form of the verb 'work' should be used, not the gerund 'working'.

× ...my job provide me the job security and also, uh, the jobs educations.

✓ ...my job provides me with job security and also education related to the job.

'Job' is singular and requires 'provides' for subject-verb agreement. 'Provide me the job security' should be 'provides me with job security'. 'The jobs educations' is incorrect; 'education related to the job' is clearer.

× ...my job provide me the job security...

✓ ...my job provides me with job security...

The singular subject 'job' requires the verb 'provides' (third person singular form).

× Yes, I definitely like the places where I work, uh, the because it's, uh, so clean and, and spotless and so quiet and the friends and our colleagues.

✓ Yes, I definitely like the place where I work because it's so clean, spotless, and quiet, and my friends and colleagues are supportive.

'The places' should be 'the place' if referring to one workplace. 'The because' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient. 'The friends and our colleagues' is awkward; 'my friends and colleagues' is better.

× So apparently to give a hand once I need the help.

✓ They are always willing to give a hand when I need help.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and structure to express the intended meaning.

× In the upcoming years, I want to continue, uh, working this company and I will pursue my master degree in business administration that helps me that my career growth, uh, and future.

✓ In the upcoming years, I want to continue working at this company and will pursue my master's degree in business administration, which will help my career growth and future.

'Working this company' should be 'working at this company'. 'Master degree' should be 'master's degree'. The relative clause is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× I want to continue, uh, working this company...

✓ I want to continue working at this company...

The verb 'working' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to a company.

× ...I will, uh, apply the manager's position.

✓ ...I will apply for the manager's position.

The verb 'apply' requires the preposition 'for' when referring to a position. Also, 'the manager's position' is correct with the definite article 'the'.