Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ như "uh" và "like". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do chọn ngành học với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ejemplo: I am currently a third-year student at Tang Long University, majoring in Chinese language. I chose this field because I am interested in exploring Chinese culture and traditions. Additionally, I want to develop language skills that will help me in my future career.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "a work". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn có thể thêm một câu giải thích về việc bạn tập trung vào việc học.

Ejemplo: I don't work at the moment because I am a full-time university student studying in Hanoi. I am focusing on my studies right now.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ thừa như "like", "uh". Bạn nên trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi về nơi làm việc, tránh lẫn lộn với nơi học. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I think Hanoi is a good place to work because it offers many opportunities and has a vibrant job market. For students, it is also a great city with many universities and cultural activities.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh dùng từ thừa như "and" ở đầu câu. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work because I can learn a lot from experienced colleagues. They provide valuable guidance and support, which helps me improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp lại các cụm từ. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng kế hoạch tương lai với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: When I was a freshman, I decided to become a translator or interpreter. That's why I chose to study Chinese translation starting from my third year.

× I choose this field because I am interest in exploring, uh, cultural, uh, traditional and something like that, and I want to develop skill for future career.

✓ I choose this field because I am interested in exploring cultural and traditional aspects, and I want to develop skills for my future career.

The adjective 'interest' should be the past participle 'interested' to describe the speaker's feeling. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities. Additionally, unnecessary fillers and vague phrases like 'something like that' should be omitted for clarity.

× I want to develop skill for future career.

✓ I want to develop skills for my future career.

The noun 'skill' is countable and should be pluralized to 'skills' when referring to multiple abilities. Also, 'future career' needs the possessive determiner 'my' to specify whose career is meant.

× No, I'm just a university student so I don't have a work now and I am studying in Hanoi.

✓ No, I'm just a university student so I don't have work now and I am studying in Hanoi.

The word 'work' is an uncountable noun here and does not need the article 'a'. Using 'a work' is incorrect.

× No, I'm just a university student so I don't have a work now and I am studying in Hanoi.

✓ No, I'm just a university student so I don't have work now and I am studying in Hanoi.

The pronoun usage is correct, but the article before 'work' is incorrect as explained previously.

× And I think it, it depends like if you, if you talk about like, is it a good place to study? I, I definitely answer yes because in Hanoi, like many French teachers, university, uh, located there.

✓ I think it depends. If you talk about whether it is a good place to study, I definitely say yes because many French universities are located in Hanoi.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary fillers and repetitions. The phrase 'many French teachers, university' is incorrect; it should be 'many French universities'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because in Hanoi, like many French teachers, university, uh, located there.

✓ because many French universities are located in Hanoi.

The preposition 'in' is missing before 'Hanoi' and the phrase 'like many French teachers, university' is incorrect. It should be 'many French universities are located in Hanoi'.

× And definitely because I have a chance to work with the experienced people so I can learn a lot of their knowledge and they help me a lot.

✓ Definitely, because I have a chance to work with experienced people, I can learn a lot from them and they help me a lot.

Starting with 'And' is unnecessary. 'The experienced people' should be 'experienced people' without 'the'. The conjunction 'so' is better replaced with a comma to connect the clauses properly. 'Learn a lot of their knowledge' is awkward; 'learn a lot from them' is clearer.

× And actually when I was a freshman, I have the orientation to become a a translator or an interpreter.

✓ Actually, when I was a freshman, I had the orientation to become a translator or an interpreter.

The past tense 'was' indicates a past time, so the verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to maintain tense consistency.

× I have the orientation to become a a translator or an interpreter.

✓ I had the orientation to become a translator or an interpreter.

There is a repeated article 'a a' which should be corrected to a single 'a'. Also, 'the orientation' is acceptable if referring to a specific event, but 'an orientation' might be more natural.

× So that's the reason why I choose the Chinese translation to learn when I when I start, when I start in 3rd year.

✓ So that's the reason why I chose to study Chinese translation when I started my third year.

The sentence has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'Choose the Chinese translation to learn' is better expressed as 'chose to study Chinese translation'. The tense should be past to match 'when I started my third year'.