Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I work' and filler words such as 'umm'. Also, try to combine related information into one or two sentences for better flow.

Ejemplo: I have been working as a school teacher for over 10 years. Initially, I taught in private schools, but two years ago, I joined a government school.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and shows your passion, but it can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'contribute in the growth' and instead be more specific.

Ejemplo: I work at a school, which is my dream job because I have always wanted to be a teacher. I enjoy helping children grow and achieve their full potential.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides good points but can be more coherent by using linking words and avoiding awkward phrases like 'whatever coming in the path'. Also, try to avoid ending sentences abruptly.

Ejemplo: Yes, my school is a great place to work because the administration is very supportive and always willing to resolve any issues faced by the staff. Moreover, my colleagues are cooperative and humble, which creates a positive work environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words like 'uh'. Try to be more concise and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely like my workplace because the staff and colleagues are humble and cooperative. This supportive environment gives me the freedom to be productive and focus more on my work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding filler words and using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: In the future, I plan to enhance my teaching skills by enrolling in professional development courses. Additionally, I want to learn different teaching methodologies to better support my students.

× Earlier I was umm, working in private schools, but recently a couple of years ago, I joined government school.

✓ Earlier, I was working in private schools, but a couple of years ago, I joined a government school.

The phrase 'recently a couple of years ago' is redundant and incorrect. 'A couple of years ago' already indicates a past time, so 'recently' should be removed. Also, 'government school' needs an article 'a' before it as it is a singular countable noun.

× I want to contribute in the growth of the children and I really enjoy when I see they are achieving their potential.

✓ I want to contribute to the growth of the children and I really enjoy seeing that they are achieving their potential.

The correct preposition after 'contribute' is 'to', not 'in'. Also, 'enjoy when I see' is awkward; it is better to say 'enjoy seeing that' to express the idea smoothly.

× the administration is very supportive and always willing to solve the issues whatever coming in the path of any staff.

✓ the administration is very supportive and always willing to solve any issues that come in the path of any staff.

The phrase 'whatever coming' is incorrect. It should be 'any issues that come' to correctly connect the clause and use the correct verb form.

× Similarly, my colleagues are also very cooperative and humble so.

✓ Similarly, my colleagues are also very cooperative and humble.

The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence is complete without it.

× I want to contribute in the growth of the children and I really enjoy when I see they are achieving their potential.

✓ I want to contribute to the growth of the children and I really enjoy seeing that they are achieving their potential.

The preposition 'in' after 'contribute' is incorrect; it should be 'to'. Also, 'enjoy when I see' is better expressed as 'enjoy seeing that' for grammatical correctness and fluency.

× I can help in better way, uh to my students.

✓ I can help in a better way to my students.

The phrase 'help in better way' is missing the article 'a' before 'better way'. The correct phrase is 'help in a better way'.