Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize the answer: start with a clear topic sentence (I work as a hotel receptionist in Tokyo Station), then give one or two specific supporting details (location, variety of guests, why you enjoy it). Avoid hesitations and minor grammar errors (e.g., "the hotel is really well-designed" not "real designed"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I work as a hotel receptionist at Tokyo Station. The hotel is well-designed and located in a busy area, so I meet guests from many countries, which I enjoy because it lets me practice English and learn about different cultures.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer first (I work in central Tokyo near [landmark]). Then add one specific supporting detail about the landmark and one about the customer base. Correct grammatical errors ("I really enjoy it" not "I'm really enjoy"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" for coherence.

Ejemplo: I work in central Tokyo near the Tokyo Skytree, a popular landmark. Because the area attracts tourists, our hotel has a very diverse mix of customers, so I enjoy the job and meeting people from around the world.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct opinion sentence (Yes, it's a good place to work). Then give two concise, specific reasons with linking words: one about customers and one about coworkers or learning opportunities. Avoid repetition and small errors ("learn about many cultures" not "get information from about").

Ejemplo: Yes, it's a great place to work because we have friendly coworkers and many interesting customers. Because guests come from diverse countries, I often learn about different cultures and broaden my perspective through our conversations.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (Yes, I like it) and give one or two clear, relevant reasons. Fix vocabulary and grammar ("shopping malls nearby" not "windy wind"; "buy things" or "purchase items" instead of "stuff"). Keep it concise and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like working there because there are many shopping malls nearby. After work I often go shopping for clothes or snacks, which I find relaxing and convenient.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear future plan (I plan to become an architect after I graduate). Explain briefly the timeline or steps and your current situation, using linking words ("however, because"). Correct word choice ("architect" not "arcade" or "common architect"). Be concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I plan to become an architect after I graduate from university. However, since professional qualification takes time, I will continue working as a hotel receptionist for now while I study architecture and gain relevant experience.

× I currently work as a receptionist in the hotel, which is located in a Tokyo station.

✓ I currently work as a receptionist at a hotel near Tokyo Station.

Use of articles and prepositions: 'in the hotel' is odd here; use 'at a hotel' for workplace and 'Tokyo Station' is a proper noun so use 'near Tokyo Station'. Also remove unnecessary 'a' before 'Tokyo station'. Suggestion: say 'at a hotel near Tokyo Station.'

× I think it's, it's hotel is real designed.

✓ I think the hotel is really well designed.

Incorrect adjective/adverb forms: 'real' should be the adverb 'really' and 'designed' needs an adverb 'well' to modify 'designed'. Also remove the redundant 'it's'. Suggestion: 'the hotel is really well designed.'

× So I like to work there because, uh, many visitors from a lot of countries, so I can interact with many people.

✓ I like working there because many visitors come from a lot of countries, so I can interact with many people.

Redundant and awkward quantifiers: 'many visitors from a lot of countries' is repetitive. Use a clear structure: 'many visitors come from many countries' or 'visitors from a lot of countries.' Also use 'I like working there' (gerund) for a general statement. Suggestion: 'I like working there because visitors come from many countries.'

× I work in a Tokyo central Tokyo, which is, uh, located in the center of Tokyo.

✓ I work in central Tokyo, which is located in the center of the city.

Redundant phrase 'a Tokyo central Tokyo' is incorrect. Use 'central Tokyo' and avoid repeating 'Tokyo'; refer to 'the city' for clarity. Use definite article 'the city'. Suggestion: 'I work in central Tokyo.'

× And also that there is a Big Sky tree, which is really famous for not only for the local, but also the visitors from other countries.

✓ There is also a big sky tree, which is really famous not only with locals but also with visitors from other countries.

Awkward phrasing and prepositions: 'for not only for the local' is wrong. Use 'famous with locals' or 'famous among locals' and parallel structure 'not only... but also...'. Also 'Big Sky tree' likely should be 'Tokyo Skytree' or 'skytree' but corrected here generically. Suggestion: 'famous among locals and visitors from other countries.'

× So the customers brought the customers of the hotel is really diverse.

✓ So the hotel's customers are really diverse.

Pronoun and word order errors: 'the customers brought the customers of the hotel' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use possessive 'hotel's customers' and correct subject-verb order 'customers are'. Suggestion: 'The hotel's customers are very diverse.'

× So I'm really enjoy.

✓ So I really enjoy it.

Missing correct verb form: 'I'm really enjoy' mixes present continuous and base verb. Use simple present 'I really enjoy' or present continuous 'I'm really enjoying it' and include object 'it'. Suggestion: 'I really enjoy it.'

× I think it is really good place because there are many good customers and also the coworkers.

✓ I think it is a really good place because there are many friendly customers and coworkers.

Missing article 'a' before 'really good place' and awkward adjective 'good' for people; 'friendly' is more natural. Also omit 'the' before 'coworkers' unless specific. Suggestion: 'a really good place because there are many friendly customers and coworkers.'

× So I find it enjoyable to walk there and also there is a lot of customers from diverse countries, diverse countries.

✓ So I find it enjoyable to work there, and there are a lot of customers from diverse countries.

Wrong verb 'walk' should be 'work' given context. Also 'there is a lot of customers' has subject-verb agreement and quantifier issues; use 'there are a lot of customers'. Remove repeated phrase. Suggestion: 'I find it enjoyable to work there, and there are many customers from diverse countries.'

× So I can get information from about the many cultures and broaden my perspective through the conversation.

✓ So I can learn about many cultures and broaden my perspective through conversation.

Incorrect preposition 'from about' and unnecessary 'the'. Use 'learn about' and uncountable 'conversation' without article for general meaning. Suggestion: 'learn about many cultures through conversation.'

× I like my place that I work because there are many shopping malls.

✓ I like the area where I work because there are many shopping malls.

Awkward relative clause 'my place that I work'; better to say 'the area where I work' or 'where I work'. 'My place' is odd for workplace location. Suggestion: 'the area where I work.'

× So I after I work there, I enjoy going to shop to purchase some stuff like clothes or some snacks, which is really, uh, really windy wind for me.

✓ After work, I enjoy going shopping to buy things like clothes or snacks, which is really relaxing for me.

Multiple errors: word order 'So I after I work there' is wrong — use 'After work'. 'Going to shop' should be 'going shopping'. 'Purchase some stuff' is informal; 'buy things' better. 'Windy wind' is incorrect; likely meant 'wind-down' or 'relaxing'. Use 'relaxing'. Suggestion: 'After work, I enjoy going shopping to buy clothes or snacks; it's really relaxing.'

× I plan to be common architect after a graduation of my university, but I think it's, uh, it's time.

✓ I plan to become an architect after graduating from university, but I know it will take time.

Incorrect collocations: 'be common architect' wrong — use 'become an architect'. 'after a graduation of my university' should be 'after graduating from university'. 'it's time' is vague; clearer 'it will take time'. Suggestion: 'I plan to become an architect after graduating from university, but I know it will take time.'

× It takes a lot of time to become an architect, so currently I'm working.

✓ It takes a lot of time to become an architect, so I'm currently working as a receptionist.

Missing specific role after 'working' and word order: place 'currently' before main verb or after 'I'm'. Make clear 'working as a receptionist.' Suggestion: 'so I'm currently working as a receptionist.'

× I'm planning to continue to work as a receptionist at a hotel, but I want to become an arcade as soon as possible.

✓ I'm planning to continue working as a receptionist at a hotel, but I want to become an architect as soon as possible.

Verb form: 'continue to work' can be 'continue working' (both acceptable). Major error: 'arcade' is wrong word; should be 'architect'. Suggestion: 'continue working... but I want to become an architect as soon as possible.'