Work— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct small errors; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid mixing past and present tense (e.g. 'I teach' vs 'I taught') and unnecessary names that might confuse the answer.

Ejemplo: I work as a mathematics teacher at a public school. I teach middle and senior high students in English, and I have been teaching for over ten years. Because I have experience both at home and abroad, I’m comfortable adapting materials for different classrooms.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct topic sentence naming the workplace, then add concise location details with linking words. Correct small phrasing errors (e.g. 'an hour from Bangkok' not 'away') and avoid repeating 'close to'.

Ejemplo: I work at Klong Wang High School in Patondani, about an hour from Bangkok. The school is near public transport like the BA bus and there are several shopping malls nearby, so it’s easy for students and staff to get there.

Sugerencia: Good content and example — tighten language and use linking words to improve coherence. Replace vague phrases ('something with regards to the functions') with specific descriptions of support. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, it’s a good place to work because my colleagues are friendly and supportive. For instance, when I first started they explained my duties clearly and provided helpful guidelines and mentorship, which made settling in much easier.

Sugerencia: Answer should begin with a clear statement ('Yes, I like it') and then give one specific reason. Fix grammar and unclear phrases ('it runs'). Avoid unnecessary place names if they confuse location. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it’s at the Sati Centre and close to amenities such as a shopping mall and bus station. Consequently, my commute is short and I can easily get lunch or run errands after school.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear goals; improve grammar and natural phrasing (e.g. 'a master's or doctoral programme', 'attend seminars and training'). Use linking words to sequence plans and give one specific example of a course or subject area.

Ejemplo: In the future I plan to advance my career by doing a master's or doctoral programme in education. In addition, I will attend seminars and training on teaching methods — for example, I intend to complete an online short course in classroom management and formative assessment.

× I'm currently working as a mathematics teacher in a public school in Batum, Tony.

✓ I'm currently working as a mathematics teacher at a public school in Batum, Tony.

Use the preposition 'at' with specific institutions such as a school. This is an incorrect preposition use (ID 11) but also relates to location collocation; change 'in a public school' to 'at a public school' for natural English. Keep present continuous 'I'm currently working' which matches the ongoing job situation.

× I taught mathematics in English for middle school and Senior High School students.

✓ I taught mathematics in English to middle school and senior high school students.

Use 'to' to indicate the recipients of teaching rather than 'for'. Also use lowercase 'senior' for 'senior high school' and no article is needed before the plural student groups. This corrects preposition use (ID 11) and article/capitalisation issues (ID 22).

× I've been teaching for more than 10 years now, both in our home country and abroad.

✓ I've been teaching for more than ten years now, both in my home country and abroad.

Use 'my' instead of 'our' when referring to the speaker's own background unless speaking for a group; this is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12). Also write numbers under ten as words in formal writing; the present perfect continuous is correctly used for an action continuing up to now.

× I work at Thomas at Klong Wang High School which is located in Patondani.

✓ I work at Thomas Klong Wang High School, which is located in Patondani.

Avoid repeating 'at' before the school name; this is incorrect preposition use/redundancy (ID 11). Add a comma before the non-restrictive clause 'which is located in Patondani'.

× It is an hour away from Bangkok city.

✓ It is an hour away from Bangkok.

When referring to the city by name, 'city' is unnecessary and unnatural here. This is an article/word choice issue (ID 22). The original meaning is preserved with a simpler form.

× Our school is close to the public transportation such as the BA bus and also it's close to other amenities like the shopping mall.

✓ Our school is close to public transportation, such as the BA bus, and also close to other amenities like a shopping mall.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before non-specific plural noun 'public transportation' (ID 11/22). Use commas to separate examples and use 'a shopping mall' for a non-specific mall. Remove the contraction 'it's' repetition for smoother sentence.

× Yes, my colleagues are friendly and approachable, and they are supportive, especially if you're a newcomer to the workplace.

✓ Yes, my colleagues are friendly and approachable, and they are supportive, especially if you are new to the workplace.

'You're a newcomer' is acceptable but 'you are new' is more natural. This suggestion focuses on clarity and register; original structure is not ungrammatical but can be improved (ID 26).

× For example, if I need something with regards to the functions at work and what are expected of me, they are always there to help me with the guidelines and rules.

✓ For example, if I need anything regarding my duties at work and what is expected of me, they are always there to help me with the guidelines and rules.

Use 'regarding' instead of 'with regards to' and 'duties' is more natural than 'functions' here. Also correct subject-verb agreement: 'what is expected' not 'what are expected' (ID 11 and ID 27). Change 'something' to 'anything' for conditional contexts.

× Yes, my workplace at the Sati Center, so it's closer to most amenities like the shopping mall and the bus station.

✓ Yes, my workplace is at the Sati Center, so it's close to most amenities like shopping malls and the bus station.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'is' (ID 23) and uses 'the shopping mall' too specifically; plural 'shopping malls' or 'a shopping mall' is more natural. Ensure sentence has a main verb and correct article use.

× It's actually convenient for me to commute from my apartment and also when I have to go to the shopping mall for lunch or after school it runs.

✓ It's actually convenient for me to commute from my apartment, and when I have to go to a shopping mall for lunch or after school, I can go easily.

The phrase 'it runs' is unclear and ungrammatical here; this is a sentence structure/verb choice error (ID 26). Replace with a clear verb phrase like 'I can go easily' to express convenience of travel. Add commas for clarity.

× In the future, I would like to advance my career by attending master's degree program or doctor's degree program.

✓ In the future, I would like to advance my career by attending a master's degree program or a doctoral degree program.

Use articles 'a' before 'master's degree program' and 'doctoral degree program' and use 'doctoral' rather than 'doctor's' for the adjective form (ID 22 and ID 7). The conditional 'would like' is appropriate for future wishes.

× I also plan to attend various seminars and trainings that would help my teaching strategies so that I will become effective teacher in the classroom.

✓ I also plan to attend various seminars and training sessions that would help my teaching strategies so that I will become an effective teacher in the classroom.

'Training' is an uncountable noun; use 'training sessions' or 'training' without 's' (ID 14). Also add the article 'an' before 'effective teacher' (ID 22). The structure 'would help my teaching strategies' is acceptable but consider 'would improve my teaching strategies' for clarity.

× For example, I will enroll myself to short courses online.

✓ For example, I will enroll in short online courses.

Do not use the reflexive pronoun 'myself' with 'enroll' here; it's unnecessary (ID 15). Use the correct preposition 'in' with 'enroll' and place 'online' before 'courses' for natural word order. Also change 'to short courses' to 'in short courses' (ID 11/15).