Puzzles— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Candidato
I would say I like the experience of puzzles in my childhood. I was not into the intelligent games like that. Instead, I enjoyed going outside with my friends and just to walked around. Yeah, and I learned toward some physical activities.
Examinador
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Candidato
Well as I said I I am not into puzzles, but if I have to make a choice I would say I do puzzles when I feel bored. For example, when I was in the high school I often make puzzles to kill time because I have no other means to unwind.
Examinador
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Candidato
Well, I think Chinese characters are so simple and easy for us, so I don't think make puzzles about characters is a challenging thing for us. Instead numbers can be a little bit difficult. So I like challenge myself. So I.
Examinador
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Candidato
Yeah, it's, it's pretty advantageous for them because I not only do I think it can help them to give time when their sons or daughters are not at home, but I also think it's a significant way to keep their memories instead of getting.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“just to walked around”应为“just walked around”。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时回答应更直接，避免冗余。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did some puzzles when I was a child, but I preferred playing outside with my friends. I enjoyed physical activities more than intellectual games.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但存在语法错误，如“make puzzles”应为“did puzzles”。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，并增加连接词使回答更连贯。
Ejemplo: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored. For instance, when I was in high school, I often did puzzles to kill time because I had no other ways to relax.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“don't think make puzzles”应为“don't think making puzzles”。建议完整表达观点，注意句子结构和时态，避免句子中断。
Ejemplo: I find word puzzles easier because Chinese characters are simple for me. Number puzzles are more difficult, so I enjoy challenging myself with them.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在语法和逻辑问题。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复和语法错误。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think puzzles are good for elderly people because they help pass the time when family members are away. Also, puzzles can help keep their memory sharp.
Gramática
× I enjoyed going outside with my friends and just to walked around.
✓ I enjoyed going outside with my friends and just walking around.
动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，不能用不定式或过去式。这里的walked应改为walking。
× when I was in the high school I often make puzzles to kill time because I have no other means to unwind.
✓ when I was in high school I often made puzzles to kill time because I had no other means to unwind.
描述过去的习惯动作，谓语动词应使用过去时。make应改为made，have应改为had。
× I think Chinese characters are so simple and easy for us, so I don't think make puzzles about characters is a challenging thing for us.
✓ I think Chinese characters are so simple and easy for us, so I don't think making puzzles with characters is a challenging thing for us.
动词think后接动名词making，且puzzles后应使用介词with而非about。
× So I like challenge myself.
✓ So I like to challenge myself.
动词like后既可接动名词也可接不定式，但此处更自然用不定式to challenge。
× I not only do I think it can help them to give time when their sons or daughters are not at home, but I also think it's a significant way to keep their memories instead of getting.
✓ I not only think it can help them pass time when their sons or daughters are not at home, but I also think it's a significant way to keep their memories instead of losing them.
句中多余的do I应去掉，动词短语give time用法不当，应改为pass time，最后的getting不完整，应改为losing them。
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