Jewelry— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say directly that you don't wear jewelry because it is hidden under your clothes due to wearing hijabs. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't often wear jewelry because, as a Muslim who wears hijabs, my jewelry would be hidden beneath my clothes, so I feel it's pointless to wear them.

Sugerencia: Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I like earrings, especially after getting my piercing, because they add charm. I also enjoy wearing necklaces since they make my neck look less plain and complement my outfits.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I usually don't buy jewelry because my parents don't give me money for it. Besides, since my jewelry would be hidden under my clothes, I don't see the point in spending money on it.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then giving specific reasons with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar for clarity.

Ejemplo: Some people wear the same piece of jewelry for a long time because they are emotionally attached to it, especially if it was a gift from someone important. I also wish to have such meaningful experiences, as only my parents are very important to me.

× I feel like I need some new necklace too.

✓ I feel like I need some new necklaces too.

The word 'necklace' is countable and in this context, 'some' implies plural, so the noun should be pluralized to 'necklaces' to agree with the quantifier.

× I think that person might just be too into that piece of jewelleries or maybe someone else who's important to him or her bought it for for that person, that's why he's keep on wearing the same piece of jewelry every day.

✓ I think that person might just be too into that piece of jewellery or maybe someone else who's important to him or her bought it for that person, that's why he keeps on wearing the same piece of jewelry every day.

The word 'jewelleries' is incorrect because 'jewellery' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'he's keep' is incorrect; the correct form is 'he keeps' to agree with the third person singular subject.

× that's why he's keep on wearing the same piece of jewelry every day.

✓ that's why he keeps on wearing the same piece of jewelry every day.

In the present simple tense, the verb must agree with the third person singular subject. 'He' requires the verb form 'keeps' instead of 'keep'.