Jewelry— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and provide a more complete and natural answer. For example, directly state the types of jewelry you wear and how often, keeping it concise and clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often wear rings and sometimes bracelets, especially on special occasions or daily to complement my outfit.

Sugerencia: Focus on completing your sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you like gold jewelry.

Ejemplo: I really like gold jewelry because it sparkles beautifully and is gentle on the skin, so it doesn't cause allergies like eczema.

Sugerencia: Complete your thoughts and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific details about your buying habits.

Ejemplo: I don't buy jewelry often because gold is expensive and my salary is limited. However, I sometimes purchase new rings or bracelets when I find affordable options.

Sugerencia: Try to finish your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific examples or reasons why people keep jewelry for a long time.

Ejemplo: I think people wear jewelry for a long time because it often holds sentimental value, like a bracelet given by a close friend, which reminds them of special memories.

× I always admiring gold and how it is sparkling.

✓ I always admire gold and how it sparkles.

The verb 'admiring' is incorrectly used here; after 'I always', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'admire' is correct. Also, 'how it is sparkling' should be 'how it sparkles' to express a general fact in present simple tense.

× Gold is a friendly to your skin so it doesn't cause like for example eczema or something.

✓ Gold is friendly to your skin so it doesn't cause, for example, eczema or something.

The article 'a' before 'friendly' is incorrect because 'friendly' is an adjective and does not need an article here. Also, the phrase 'cause like for example eczema' is awkward; 'cause, for example, eczema' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Gold is bright and has.

✓ Gold is bright and shiny.

The sentence 'Gold is bright and has.' is incomplete and lacks an object after 'has'. It should be completed with an adjective or noun to make sense, such as 'shiny'.

× Well, since the gold is very expensive, I believe that is not affordable these days due to my salary.

✓ Well, since gold is very expensive, I believe it is not affordable these days due to my salary.

The phrase 'the gold' is incorrect here; 'gold' as a material is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'that is not affordable' should be 'it is not affordable' to refer properly to gold.

× But I was always buying new stuff, new rings, a new bracelets because.

✓ But I have always been buying new stuff, new rings, and new bracelets because.

The past continuous 'was always buying' is awkward here; present perfect continuous 'have always been buying' better expresses a repeated action up to now. Also, 'a new bracelets' is incorrect; 'bracelets' is plural and should not have 'a'. Added 'and' for correct list structure.

× a new bracelets

✓ new bracelets

'Bracelets' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× Well, this is a nice question actually it is deeper than you think.

✓ Well, this is a nice question; actually, it is deeper than you think.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. Adding a semicolon or period and a comma after 'actually' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Sometimes the bracelet could be a memory of someone, maybe could be a gift from your friend.

✓ Sometimes the bracelet could be a memory of someone; maybe it could be a gift from your friend.

The second clause lacks a subject; adding 'it' clarifies the sentence and corrects the pronoun usage.

× So it has this related memory that make us.

✓ So it has this related memory that makes us remember.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'memory'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'remember' completes the thought.