Part 1
Examinador
How do you like geography?
Candidato
Actually, no, I didn't like geography because it's very complicated by the way the map. It's really tough for me to starting time and now also I I can't really enjoy the geography rather than other subjects.
Examinador
Do you think geography is useful?
Candidato
Actually it's something useful nowadays because we have understand the landscape and directions of these maps, understand the climate changes and other other stuff. So this is useful in our daily life here.
Examinador
Have you ever learned geography?
Candidato
Of course, in my childhood time I really learn geography, but it's very hard for me and I'm very struggle to learn geography. My teacher teaches very neatly.
Examinador
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Candidato
Absolutely not because I can't manage this, uh, Tufts in my life because I didn't understand the geographical concerns rather than other topics or other subjects. I really refuse this geography teacher. I can't.
Examinador
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Candidato
Yeah, actually it's quite excitement for an other kind of geography, because we have know about the patterns of the countryside and cultures. Like everything else, I'm quite interested, disturbing and I try to find a causes.
How do you like geography?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your feelings with specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.
Ejemplo: I don't like geography because I find maps very complicated. From the beginning until now, I have struggled to understand it, so I don't enjoy geography as much as other subjects.
Do you think geography is useful?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using correct verb forms and linking words to make it coherent. Be more specific about how geography is useful in daily life.
Ejemplo: Yes, geography is useful nowadays because it helps us understand landscapes, directions on maps, and climate changes. Therefore, it plays an important role in our daily lives.
Have you ever learned geography?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Use correct tense and grammar to make your answer clearer. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details with linking words.
Ejemplo: Yes, I learned geography during my childhood. However, I found it very hard and struggled to understand it, even though my teacher explained the lessons clearly.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural by using correct expressions and grammar. Give a clear reason and avoid repetition.
Ejemplo: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't understand geography well compared to other subjects, so I don't think I can manage it.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words.
Ejemplo: Yes, I am excited to learn about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand different landscapes and cultures. I am interested in discovering the causes behind these patterns.
× Actually, no, I didn't like geography because it's very complicated by the way the map.
✓ Actually, no, I didn't like geography because of the way the map is very complicated.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'because it's very complicated by the way the map'. The phrase should be 'because of the way the map is very complicated' to correctly express the reason. The past tense 'didn't like' is correct here, but the explanation clause needs correction.
× It's really tough for me to starting time and now also I I can't really enjoy the geography rather than other subjects.
✓ It's really tough for me to start, and even now I can't really enjoy geography compared to other subjects.
The phrase 'to starting time' is incorrect; after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so 'to start' is correct. Also, 'rather than other subjects' is better expressed as 'compared to other subjects' for clarity.
× Actually it's something useful nowadays because we have understand the landscape and directions of these maps, understand the climate changes and other other stuff.
✓ Actually, it's something useful nowadays because we understand the landscape and directions of these maps, understand climate changes and other stuff.
The phrase 'we have understand' is incorrect; it should be 'we understand' in present tense. Also, 'climate changes' is better without 'the' here, and 'other other stuff' has a repeated word.
× Of course, in my childhood time I really learn geography, but it's very hard for me and I'm very struggle to learn geography.
✓ Of course, in my childhood I really learned geography, but it was very hard for me and I struggled a lot to learn geography.
The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match 'in my childhood'. 'I'm very struggle' is incorrect; it should be 'I struggled' to express past difficulty.
× My teacher teaches very neatly.
✓ My teacher teaches very well.
The adverb 'neatly' is not appropriate for teaching; 'well' is the correct adverb to describe how someone teaches.
× Absolutely not because I can't manage this, uh, Tufts in my life because I didn't understand the geographical concerns rather than other topics or other subjects.
✓ Absolutely not because I can't manage this task in my life since I don't understand the geographical concepts as well as other topics or subjects.
'Tufts' is likely a mispronunciation of 'tasks'. Also, 'didn't understand' should be present tense 'don't understand' to match 'can't manage'. 'Rather than' is better replaced with 'as well as' for comparison.
× I really refuse this geography teacher. I can't.
✓ I really refuse to be a geography teacher. I can't.
The verb 'refuse' should be followed by 'to be' to indicate the action refused. 'I can't' is incomplete but acceptable as an expression.
× Yeah, actually it's quite excitement for an other kind of geography, because we have know about the patterns of the countryside and cultures.
✓ Yeah, actually it's quite exciting to learn about another kind of geography because we know about the patterns of the countryside and cultures.
'Excitement' is a noun; the adjective 'exciting' is needed here. 'An other' should be 'another'. 'We have know' is incorrect; 'we know' is correct present tense.
× Like everything else, I'm quite interested, disturbing and I try to find a causes.
✓ Like everything else, I'm quite interested and curious, and I try to find the causes.
'Disturbing' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'curious' or 'intrigued'. 'A causes' is incorrect; 'the causes' is correct.