Geography— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially towards the end. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid trailing off and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I'm not very interested in geography as a subject, but I do find landscapes fascinating. For example, I enjoy learning about natural features like rocks, sand, and beaches because they show how nature shapes the environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear due to the use of 'UMM' and incomplete ideas. Make sure to use clear vocabulary and explain your points fully. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it helps us understand natural disasters. For instance, by studying rocks and soil, we can predict earthquakes or floods, which helps keep people safe.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using smoother sentence structure and linking words. Try to avoid repetition and give a concise, well-structured response.

Ejemplo: Yes, I studied geography when I was in school in Nepal. However, it was a long time ago, so I don't remember many details now.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some grammar mistakes. Try to speak more confidently and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and concisely.

Ejemplo: I don't think I want to be a geography teacher because I haven't studied the subject for a long time. To teach it properly, I would need to spend a lot of time studying, which is not possible for me right now.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is a bit repetitive and ends abruptly. Try to organise your ideas clearly, avoid repetition, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because each country has unique landscapes and environments. For example, I find it interesting to compare mountains and beaches in different parts of the world.

× I'm really fascinated about the landscapes and the nature

✓ I'm really fascinated by the landscapes and the nature

The verb 'fascinated' is typically followed by the preposition 'by' to indicate the cause of fascination, not 'about'. Using 'about' here is incorrect.

× how they're safe and the rocks, sand, beaches, because.

✓ how they're safe, and the rocks, sand, and beaches.

The phrase 'how they're safe' is unclear and likely incorrect in context. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought. The correction removes 'because' and adds commas for clarity.

× I think geography is really useful as geography can help to find out the UMM.

✓ I think geography is really useful as it can help to find out the UMM.

Repeating 'geography' twice in the same sentence is redundant. Using 'it' as a pronoun improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Find out the incomings of natural disasters or any UMM histories by studying rocks, sands and the materials.

✓ Find out the occurrences of natural disasters or any UMM histories by studying rocks, sand, and materials.

The word 'incomings' is incorrect in this context; 'occurrences' is more appropriate. Also, 'sands' should be singular 'sand' when referring to the substance generally. 'The materials' should be 'materials' without 'the' for general reference.

× I've yes, I've learned geography while I was back in Nepal while I was in school, but it was a really long time so I don't have particular knowledge about it.

✓ Yes, I've learned geography when I was back in Nepal at school, but it was a really long time ago so I don't have particular knowledge about it.

The phrase 'I've yes' is incorrect; 'Yes, I've' is correct. 'While I was in school' is better expressed as 'at school'. Also, 'a really long time' should be 'a really long time ago' to indicate past time.

× I don't think I can, I'll be able to teach a geography because it's been a long time.

✓ I don't think I can, I'll be able to teach geography because it's been a long time.

The noun 'geography' is an uncountable subject and does not require the article 'a' before it.

× I don't think I can, I'll be able to teach a geography because it's been a long time.

✓ I don't think I'll be able to teach geography because it's been a long time.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'I don't think I can' and 'I'll be able to' which contradict each other. The corrected sentence expresses the intended meaning clearly.

× I haven't studied geography and to get back into geography, I have to put all the efforts and timing, uh, to study geography, uh, which won't be possible.

✓ I haven't studied geography and to get back into it, I have to put in all the effort and time to study geography, which won't be possible.

The phrase 'put all the efforts and timing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put in all the effort and time'. Also, 'get back into geography' is better expressed as 'get back into it' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I think I I'll, I'll learn more about the geograph for another countries because I'm open to learning and I'm also fascinated by the country's landscape as it has its own different unique features and landscapes and environments.

✓ Yes, I think I'll learn more about the geography of other countries because I'm open to learning and I'm also fascinated by each country's landscape as it has its own unique features, landscapes, and environments.

The word 'geograph' is a typo and should be 'geography'. 'For another countries' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'of other countries'. Also, 'different unique' is redundant; 'unique' alone suffices. Added commas for clarity.