Part 1
Examinador
How do you like geography?
Candidato
I like geography from my childhood because from my childhood I'm very interested to geopolitics and you know, politics or geopolitics is sounded by sounded by geography. So at first I have to know about about the geography and where the countries are situated. And then I have.
Examinador
Do you think geography is useful?
Candidato
Yeah, geography is useful because I, I, we, we can know where the car, where the, where country situated, where the, what is the currency of the car country, what is the traditional culture of the country. And when I have travel and navigation or travel any country and for navigation I have much to know about geography, that's all.
Examinador
Have you ever learned geography?
Candidato
Yes, I have learned geography in my school days. Geography was in my curriculum. Curriculum I, I, I have, I have, I have. I have learned where the country, where country is situated and what the currency of a country and the geopolitical relationships among the countries.
Examinador
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Candidato
Exactly. No, I am not. I am not want to be a geography teacher, but I prefer to be a geopolitical mentor by I want I want to open a YouTube channel on the, on the base on the on geopolitics and, and want to spread my knowledge about geopolitics among people.
Examinador
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Candidato
Yes, I want more. I want more know about the geography of other countries because it will give me a a clear concept to their their locations and and form and.
How do you like geography?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.
Ejemplo: I have liked geography since childhood because it helps me understand geopolitics. Knowing where countries are located is important to grasp political relationships.
Do you think geography is useful?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Use clear and complete sentences. Provide specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ejemplo: Yes, geography is useful because it helps us know where countries are located, their currencies, and cultures. For example, when I travel, understanding geography helps me navigate and appreciate local traditions.
Have you ever learned geography?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Give a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ejemplo: Yes, I studied geography at school as part of the curriculum. I learned about countries' locations, their currencies, and geopolitical relationships.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your preference.
Ejemplo: No, I do not want to be a geography teacher. Instead, I want to become a geopolitical mentor by creating a YouTube channel to share my knowledge about geopolitics with others.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific reasons using linking words.
Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because it will help me understand their locations and cultures better.
× I like geography from my childhood because from my childhood I'm very interested to geopolitics and you know, politics or geopolitics is sounded by sounded by geography.
✓ I have liked geography since my childhood because since then I have been very interested in geopolitics, and you know, politics or geopolitics is influenced by geography.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm very interested to geopolitics' which should be 'I have been very interested in geopolitics' to express a continuing interest from the past to present. Also, 'is sounded by sounded by geography' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'is influenced by geography'. Use of present perfect and present perfect continuous tenses is appropriate here to indicate ongoing interest since childhood.
× So at first I have to know about about the geography and where the countries are situated.
✓ So first, I had to learn about geography and where the countries are situated.
The phrase 'I have to know about about the geography' is awkward and repetitive. The correct expression is 'I had to learn about geography' to indicate past learning. Also, 'at first' is better replaced with 'first' for clarity. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy and using appropriate tense.
× And then I have.
✓ And then I have continued learning.
The sentence 'And then I have.' is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning, such as 'And then I have continued learning.' to maintain coherence.
× Yeah, geography is useful because I, I, we, we can know where the car, where the, where country situated, where the, what is the currency of the car country, what is the traditional culture of the country.
✓ Yeah, geography is useful because we can know where the country is situated, what the currency of the country is, and what the traditional culture of the country is.
The original sentence has redundant pronouns 'I, I, we, we' which is incorrect. Also, 'car country' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'the country'. The sentence should use 'we' consistently and correct word order for questions embedded in statements, e.g., 'where the country is situated' instead of 'where country situated'.
× And when I have travel and navigation or travel any country and for navigation I have much to know about geography, that's all.
✓ And when I travel or navigate in any country, I need to know a lot about geography, that's all.
The phrase 'when I have travel and navigation or travel any country' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'when I travel or navigate in any country'. Also, 'I have much to know about geography' should be 'I need to know a lot about geography' for natural expression.
× Yes, I have learned geography in my school days.
✓ Yes, I learned geography in my school days.
While 'I have learned' is not incorrect, 'I learned' is more appropriate here because the action happened in a finished time period in the past ('school days'). Present perfect is generally used for actions with relevance to the present or unspecified time.
× Curriculum I, I, I have, I have, I have.
✓ The curriculum included geography.
The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. It should be simplified to clearly state that geography was part of the curriculum.
× I have learned where the country, where country is situated and what the currency of a country and the geopolitical relationships among the countries.
✓ I have learned where countries are situated, what the currency of each country is, and the geopolitical relationships among countries.
The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and plural forms. 'Where country is situated' should be 'where countries are situated'. Also, 'what the currency of a country' needs to be completed with 'is'. The sentence is improved by adding conjunctions and correcting plural forms.
× Exactly. No, I am not. I am not want to be a geography teacher, but I prefer to be a geopolitical mentor by I want I want to open a YouTube channel on the, on the base on the on geopolitics and, and want to spread my knowledge about geopolitics among people.
✓ Exactly. No, I do not want to be a geography teacher, but I prefer to be a geopolitical mentor. I want to open a YouTube channel based on geopolitics and spread my knowledge about geopolitics among people.
The phrase 'I am not want to be' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not want to be'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and repetitive. It should be divided into clear sentences with proper verb forms and conjunctions.
× Yes, I want more. I want more know about the geography of other countries because it will give me a a clear concept to their their locations and and form and.
✓ Yes, I want to know more about the geography of other countries because it will give me a clear understanding of their locations and forms.
The phrase 'I want more know' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to know more'. Also, 'a clear concept to their their locations and and form and' is unclear and repetitive. It should be 'a clear understanding of their locations and forms'. The modal verb 'want to' requires the base form of the verb 'know'.