Geography— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to be honestly' và 'used to a big fan'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và không rõ ràng về cảm xúc hiện tại của bạn với môn địa lý.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I used to be a big fan of geography, but now my interest has decreased quite a bit.

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi lặp từ 'another another' và câu hơi dài, chưa sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, obviously geography is very useful. For example, when I visit a European country, it helps me understand more about its culture and environment.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'the student of the major is geography' và câu cuối hơi mơ hồ. Bạn nên sửa lại câu cho chính xác và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'you know'.

Ejemplo: Yes, everyone in Vietnam studies geography at school. Actually, I am majoring in geography, so I consider myself quite good at this subject even though I don't study much.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'depends 5050', 'the spec', 'spread my thinking'. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để diễn đạt ý muốn truyền đạt.

Ejemplo: That's a good question. I am good at geography, but I'm not sure if I want to be a teacher because I don't feel confident in explaining things to others.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'geography really useful' thiếu động từ 'is', 'other country' nên là 'other countries'. Câu hơi dài và lặp ý. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I believe learning about the geography of other countries is useful. With more knowledge, I can become an expert in this field, and I find it quite easy to learn about different countries.

× To be honestly, I used to a big fan of geography, but until now I think that my love for it is decreased a lot.

✓ To be honest, I used to be a big fan of geography, but until now I think that my love for it has decreased a lot.

The phrase 'To be honestly' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be honest'. Also, 'used to a big fan' is incorrect; it should be 'used to be a big fan' because 'used to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Additionally, 'is decreased' should be 'has decreased' to correctly express the present perfect tense indicating a change over time.

× For me, when I come to another another nation like in the Europe, I think geography will help me to know more and to get more knowledge in that country.

✓ For me, when I come to another nation like in Europe, I think geography will help me to know more and to get more knowledge about that country.

The phrase 'in the Europe' is incorrect; 'Europe' as a continent does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'get more knowledge in that country' should be 'get more knowledge about that country' because 'knowledge about' is the correct collocation.

× Yes, of course, everyone in Vietnam has to learn geography when they are in school. And you know, actually I am the student of the major is geography.

✓ Yes, of course, everyone in Vietnam has to learn geography when they are in school. And you know, actually I am a student majoring in geography.

The phrase 'I am the student of the major is geography' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I am a student majoring in geography' to express the field of study properly.

× So I think I'm really good at this subject, even I'm not studying a lot.

✓ So I think I'm really good at this subject, even though I'm not studying a lot.

The conjunction 'even' is incomplete here; the correct phrase is 'even though' to introduce a contrast clause.

× Oh, I think it depends 5050 because even I'm actually really good at this track and I know a lot of the spec, but I'm not really good at teaching anyone.

✓ Oh, I think it depends 50/50 because even though I'm actually really good at this track and I know a lot of the specifics, I'm not really good at teaching anyone.

The phrase 'even I'm actually' is incorrect; it should be 'even though I'm actually' to properly introduce a concessive clause. Also, '5050' should be '50/50' to represent an equal chance. 'Spec' is informal and unclear; 'specifics' is more appropriate.

× Like I'm not good at spread. Spread my thinking.

✓ Like I'm not good at spreading, spreading my thinking.

The verb 'spread' should be in the gerund form 'spreading' after 'good at' because 'good at' is followed by a verb in the -ing form.

× Oh yes, of course. I think that geography really useful for me and if I have more knowledge about other country I can also become an expert in this aspect.

✓ Oh yes, of course. I think that geography is really useful for me and if I have more knowledge about other countries I can also become an expert in this aspect.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'geography'. Also, 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' because it refers to multiple countries.

× And I think that I'm good at this subject too. So it is not hard, too hard for me to know about the knowledge of all the countries.

✓ And I think that I'm good at this subject too. So it is not too hard for me to learn about the knowledge of all the countries.

The phrase 'not hard, too hard' is awkward; it should be 'not too hard' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'to know about the knowledge' is redundant; 'to learn about' is more appropriate.