Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by making it more concise and correcting minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are clear and natural. For example, instead of 'it can be seen in daily part of my life', you could say 'they brighten my daily life'. Also, avoid repeating 'love' too often.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they bring positivity and brighten my daily life. Although many people don't grow flowers nowadays, my mother enjoys cultivating them in both our backyard and front yard.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by being more specific. Also, avoid factual inaccuracies; oxygen mainly comes from plants in general, not just flowers. Try to add a linking phrase like 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: My mother loves flowers because they create a refreshing atmosphere and bring positivity. She feels complete when surrounded by nature and fresh air. Since plants, including flowers, produce oxygen, they are very important to us.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition like 'it it' and use linking words such as 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, try to be more specific about the changes you mention.

Ejemplo: In the past, many flowers were grown near my home; however, nowadays fewer people grow them. Nevertheless, my house still has a garden full of flowers, along with a backyard where we grow fruits and vegetables.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers because they bring positivity. I cherish these pictures in my camera roll so I can enjoy looking at flowers anytime I want.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition like 'they they' and use linking words such as 'for example' or 'such as' to explain occasions. Also, try to be more precise in your explanation.

Ejemplo: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others on special occasions, such as birthdays or achievements. Flowers are given as gifts or rewards to make recipients feel appreciated and happy.

× They are so colorful and it can be seen in daily part of my life.

✓ They are so colorful and it can be seen in the daily part of my life.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'daily part'. This is an article error (ID 22). Adding 'the' specifies the particular part of life being referred to, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Nowadays people don't often grow flowers, but my mother, she loves to grow them in the backyard and even the front yard.

✓ Nowadays people don't often grow flowers, but my mother loves to grow them in the backyard and even the front yard.

The phrase 'my mother, she loves' is redundant. The pronoun 'she' is unnecessary after 'my mother'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12). Removing 'she' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× The oxygen we breathe comes from flowers and plants, so they are important to us.

✓ The oxygen we breathe comes from plants, so they are important to us.

Oxygen is produced mainly by plants, not flowers specifically. While not strictly a grammar error, this is a factual inaccuracy. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, this sentence is acceptable. No correction needed here.

× In the earlier days there were a lot of flowers grown near my place, but nowadays it it has been less amount that can be seen in people's house.

✓ In the earlier days there were a lot of flowers grown near my place, but nowadays there are fewer flowers that can be seen in people's houses.

'Less amount' is incorrect when referring to countable nouns like 'flowers'; 'fewer' should be used instead. Also, 'people's house' should be pluralized to 'people's houses' to match plural 'people'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Although in my house we have a garden full of flowers and the backyard full of fruits and vegetables.

✓ Although, in my house, we have a garden full of flowers and a backyard full of fruits and vegetables.

The original sentence is a fragment because it starts with 'Although' but lacks a main clause. Adding commas and restructuring the sentence to include a main clause or removing 'Although' would fix this. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Here, adding commas improves clarity.

× Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers in my daily life as I feel they give such positivity and keeping it as a memory in my camera roll is something that I cherish.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers in my daily life as I feel they give such positivity, and keeping them as memories in my camera roll is something that I cherish.

The phrase 'keeping it as a memory' is incorrect because 'photos' is plural, so 'it' should be 'them' and 'memory' should be plural 'memories'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and incorrect pronoun use (ID 12). Correcting pronouns and plural forms makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, in my country people often send flowers to one another on special occasions to make them feel pretty about themselves.

✓ Yes, in my country people often send flowers to one another on special occasions to make them feel happy about themselves.

The phrase 'make them feel pretty about themselves' is awkward and semantically incorrect because 'pretty' is usually used for appearance, not feelings. Changing 'pretty' to 'happy' corrects the meaning and usage. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).

× This is something that can be given as a gift or a reward to make them happy for what they have done or just in general to greet somebody they they give flowers.

✓ This is something that can be given as a gift or a reward to make them happy for what they have done, or just in general to greet somebody; they give flowers.

The sentence is confusing and contains a repeated word 'they they'. It lacks proper punctuation and clear structure. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correcting the repetition and adding punctuation improves clarity.