Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中表达了对花的喜爱，但句子结构较为混乱，且用词不够准确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并正确使用连词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because my family has been growing them for generations. I especially like lilies and roses because of their beautiful colors and fragrance.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并补充细节使回答更具体。

Ejemplo: Yes, many people I know love flowers, including my family and my best friend Xiaxin. We often give each other flowers as birthday gifts.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构不够清晰，部分表达重复。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Not only do we grow them in our family garden, but flowers also bloom beautifully along highways and city roads.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和结构，明确表达拍摄花卉的习惯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I travel to new places and see beautiful or unusual flowers.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确时间对比，并注意语法正确。

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers nowadays. However, decades ago, it was less common because people had less money and considered flowers unnecessary.

× Yes, I definitely love flowers because my parents and grandparents love growing flowers in our families so that I love flowers from a very young age and especially either some Lily and some rose.

✓ Yes, I definitely love flowers because my parents and grandparents love growing flowers in our family, so I have loved flowers from a very young age, especially lilies and roses.

这里“families”应为单数“family”，因为指的是一个家庭。'either some Lily and some rose'结构不正确，应改为复数形式'lilies and roses'，表示多种花。

× Yes, like I said above, my family members are all love flowers and also my besties.

✓ Yes, like I said above, my family members all love flowers, and so do my besties.

'are all love'结构错误，动词不应用进行时态，应为'subject + love'。'my besties'后应加连词'and'连接句子。

× My best friends whose name Xiaxin is really like flowers.

✓ My best friend, whose name is Xiaxin, really likes flowers.

'friends'应为单数'friend'，因为后面指的是一个人。'whose name Xiaxin is'语序错误，应为'whose name is Xiaxin'。'really like'应为第三人称单数'really likes'。

× Every time when me and her in birthday we give each other.

✓ Every time when she and I have our birthdays, we give each other gifts.

'me and her'应为主格'she and I'。'in birthday'表达错误，应为'have our birthdays'。句子缺少宾语，补充'give each other gifts'使句子完整。

× Especially not only in my family garden we grow flowers, but also in our cities, a highway and high speed roads.

✓ Especially, not only do we grow flowers in my family garden, but also in our city, on highways and high-speed roads.

'in our cities'应为单数'city'，且'cities'前缺少冠词。'a highway and high speed roads'应改为复数形式'highways and high-speed roads'，并且应使用介词'on'表示在路上。

× They're all flowers growing, blooming alongside the road.

✓ There are flowers growing and blooming alongside the road.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，改为完整句子。

× Yes, when sometimes I saw some very blooming and beautiful flowers around the world or especially when I go to, I went to some new places to travel.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I see very blooming and beautiful flowers around the world, especially when I go to new places to travel,

时态混用，'saw'应改为现在时'see'以符合习惯表达。'when I go to, I went to'重复且混乱，应统一为'when I go to'。

× I always take photo with some flowers are not familiar in our days, I took some photos.

✓ I always take photos with some flowers that are not familiar in our area; I have taken some photos.

句子结构混乱，缺少关系代词'that'连接定语从句。'photo'应为复数'photos'。时态应统一。

× In about like decades ago, my country's people don't often send flowers to each other because they have not enough money to buy those things, which is not necessary for life.

✓ About decades ago, people in my country didn't often send flowers to each other because they didn't have enough money to buy those things, which were not necessary for life.

时态错误，描述过去事件应使用过去时。'don't'应为'didn't'，'have not'应为'didn't have'。'which is'应为'which were'，指代过去的情况。

× But nowadays our like many people around us around me like send flowers to.

✓ But nowadays, many people around me like to send flowers to others.

句子结构混乱，'our like many people around us around me'不通顺，应简化为'many people around me'。'like send'应为'like to send'。