Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt and descriptive, but try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, avoid repeating words like 'the' twice and use correct phrases like 'the fragrance' instead of 'the fragrant'. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and ensure clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially in spring when new buds bloom. The fragrance and vibrant colours of flowers refresh the soul and bring peace and tranquility. Their beauty makes nature look lively and colourful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good and personal, but try to structure it better by starting with a clear topic sentence. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers and is known as the 'lady with the green thumb' in our family. Because of her passion, our house is filled with flowers, which make the space warm and beautiful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid confusing phrases and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my hometown has many flowers, especially in spring. Many families love gardening, and visiting their houses to see the flowers was one of my favourite childhood memories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing like 'spoil the beautiful flower'. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't take photos of flowers daily; it depends on the season. During spring, when flowers are in full bloom, I seize every chance to capture their beauty. Even in other seasons, if I see a flower, I often take a photo.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is interrupted by fillers like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to speak more fluently and organise your answer with linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, sending flower bouquets has become quite popular in my country. People often bring flowers when visiting friends in hospital or at their homes, as flowers express affection and love.

× I love the fragrant that comes from the flowers and how vibrant the the nature looks and how colorful it is.

✓ I love the fragrance that comes from the flowers and how vibrant the nature looks and how colorful it is.

The word 'fragrant' is an adjective, but here a noun 'fragrance' is needed to refer to the smell coming from the flowers. Also, 'the the' is a repetition error; only one 'the' is needed before 'nature'.

× This is.

✓ This is refreshing.

The sentence 'This is.' is incomplete and lacks a verb or complement. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning, such as 'This is refreshing.' to express the feeling described earlier.

× all the humans in the families they love house and it was one of the core memories in my childhood where I love visiting houses because of the flowers that they have just to enjoy the spring with the beautiful flowers.

✓ all the humans in the families they love houses and it was one of the core memories in my childhood where I loved visiting houses because of the flowers that they have just to enjoy the spring with the beautiful flowers.

The word 'house' should be plural 'houses' to match 'all the humans in the families' who love multiple houses. Also, 'love' should be past tense 'loved' to match 'it was one of the core memories' indicating past time.

× And I went to this day they still whole adopted.

✓ And even to this day, they still hold on to this tradition.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems to mean that the tradition is still maintained. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× any chances that I get and spoil the beautiful flower, I would just be quick to capture the moment and the flowers.

✓ any chance that I get to spot the beautiful flower, I would be quick to capture the moment and the flowers.

The phrase 'any chances' should be 'any chance' as 'chance' is uncountable here. 'Spoil' is incorrect in this context; likely intended word is 'spot' meaning to see or notice. Also, 'would just be quick' is better as 'would be quick' for clarity.

× Gifting a flower bouquet has become umm, A frequent thing now when we see the friend in the hospital or visit or their houses, I bring.

✓ Gifting a flower bouquet has become, umm, a frequent thing now. When we see a friend in the hospital or visit their houses, I bring flowers.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect preposition use. 'See the friend' should be 'see a friend'. 'Visit or their houses' is unclear; corrected to 'visit their houses'. Also, the sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I believe flower brings about uh, around affections and to convey our love to them.

✓ I believe flowers bring about affection and convey our love to them.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the general statement. 'Brings' changes to 'bring' to agree with plural subject. 'Around affections' is incorrect; 'affection' is uncountable and does not need 'around'. Also, 'to convey' is better as 'and convey' to parallel the verb 'bring'.