Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid phrases like 'in my thinking' and use more natural expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much because they brighten up the environment. Moreover, planting flowers and trees helps improve air quality, which is essential for our health.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Focus on one person and describe their love for flowers clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same words.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She is very eco-friendly and often grows many plants and flowers in our garden, which makes our home look beautiful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'which have pregnant'. Try to use simple and clear sentences. Also, avoid repeating words and focus on giving specific details about the flowers you grow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I grow many different types of flowers at my home. They are colourful and beautiful, and they make the surroundings more attractive.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Also, the phrase 'flowers which I had drawn' is confusing. Try to be clear and concise, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers I grow and share them on Instagram. Many people like and share my pictures, which motivates me to capture more beautiful moments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with specific examples. Avoid awkward phrases like 'it is trying to gift flowers' and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts to express love or blessings, especially on birthdays and weddings. I also prefer giving flowers to my friends and family on special occasions.

× I am environmental friendly.

✓ I am environmentally friendly.

The phrase 'environmental friendly' is incorrect because 'friendly' is an adjective that needs to be modified by an adverb. The correct adverb form is 'environmentally'. So, 'environmentally friendly' is the proper expression.

× I used to prefer a lot of plants to grow as well as to water them because in my thinking it is very essential to plant more and more trees because they are part and parcel of our life.

✓ I used to prefer growing a lot of plants as well as watering them because I think it is very essential to plant more and more trees as they are part and parcel of our life.

The phrase 'prefer a lot of plants to grow' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund ('growing') when expressing liking an activity. Also, 'in my thinking' is awkward; 'I think' is more natural. The preposition 'because in my thinking' is replaced with 'because I think'.

× She she usually grow a lot of plants as well as flowers.

✓ She usually grows a lot of plants as well as flowers.

There is a repetition of the pronoun 'She'. Also, the verb 'grow' should be in third person singular form 'grows' to agree with the subject 'She'.

× Yes of course at my home there are various type of flowers which are grown by me as as I am very environmental friendly so I used to grow plethora of flowers which I love like which have pregnant, beautiful pregnant as well as they increase the beauty of the nature.

✓ Yes, of course at my home there are various types of flowers which are grown by me as I am very environmentally friendly, so I grow a plethora of flowers which I love, like beautiful fragrant ones, and they increase the beauty of nature.

'Various type' should be 'various types' because 'various' refers to plural. 'Plethora' is followed by 'of' and plural noun 'flowers'. The phrase 'which have pregnant, beautiful pregnant' is unclear and likely a misuse of 'pregnant'; 'fragrant' is probably intended. Also, 'the nature' should be 'nature' without 'the'.

× I usually take pictures of the flowers which I had drawn and I usually post that on my Instagram and I get a lot of likes on it as well as most of the individuals reshare them on their Instagram page as well as I capture that in photos to to just create a moment as well.

✓ I usually take pictures of the flowers which I have grown and post them on my Instagram. I get a lot of likes, and many people reshare them on their Instagram pages. I capture these photos just to create a moment.

'Had drawn' is incorrect; 'have grown' fits better as flowers are grown, not drawn. Also, 'most of the individuals' is better as 'many people'. The sentence is long and repetitive; breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. 'To to' is a typo and corrected to 'to'.

× Yes, of course now in my nation it is trying to gift flowers to other individuals as a love or as a blessings, specially on occasions of birthday, wedding and some other occasions of not only others but me also usually prefer to give flowers to others rather than.

✓ Yes, of course, in my country people try to gift flowers to others as a sign of love or blessings, especially on occasions like birthdays, weddings, and other events. Not only others, but I also usually prefer to give flowers to others.

The phrase 'it is trying to gift' is incorrect; 'people try to gift' is appropriate. 'As a love or as a blessings' should be 'as a sign of love or blessings'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. The sentence ending 'rather than' is incomplete and removed for clarity.